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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(满分5 manfen5.com), 并在其下面写出改加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在改词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My friend Julie had been trying to lose weight for years. She was so afraid of being laughed  by others that she went on one diet after others, but none of them real worked. She felt sad and hopeless about herself. I encouraged her to turn to his doctor for help. Finally, she followed her doctor's advices and began to eat a simple and balanced diet. She eats fruits and vegetables and avoided high-fat food. In addition, she joined an exercise class. She worked out three times a week. At the first, she felt tired. But encouraging by her friends, she chose to stick to it and eventually she reached her goal. Best of all, she is able to stay at her ideal weight now. That is why she has developed health habits in her daily life.

 

1.laughed后加at 2.第二个others为 another 3.改real为really 4.改his为her 5.改advices为advice 6.改eats为ate 7.去掉the 8.改encouraging为encouraged 9.改why为because 10.改health为healthy 【解析】 1.laughed后加at 考查动词短语。Laugh at 嘲笑; 2.第二个others为 another 考查代词。One after another一个接一个; 3.改real为really 考查副词。句意:但没有一个人真正的工作; 4.改his为her 考查代词。句意:我鼓励她向医生救助。根据上文提到She was so afraid of being laughed by others可知是女性; 5.改advices为advice 考查名词。Advice是不可数名词。 6.改eats为ate 考查动词的时态。根据上一句话提到Finally, she followed her doctor's advices and began to eat a simple and balanced diet.可知用一般过去时; 7.去掉the 考查冠词。At first 首先; 8.改encouraging为encouraged 考查非谓语动词。句意:但受到她朋友的鼓励,她坚持了下来最终达到目标。 9.改why为because 考查表语从句。句意:这就是因为她在日常生活中养成的健康习惯。 10.改health为healthy 考查形容词。Healthy habit健康的习惯。 考点 :短文改错。
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Festivals and celebrations    1.   (hold) to honour famous people and events. In China, there are many festivals, among    2.   the most important one is the Spring Festival.

The Spring Festival in China is    3.   (traditional) celebrated on January 1st in Lunar New Year.

4.   New Year’s Eve, the whole family gather together 5.   (eat) a family reunion dinner and watch TV, 6.   (enjoy) wonderful   7.  (perform). Children love dressing   8.  in fine new clothes and sometimes have lucky money in red paper. At times, people set off fireworks and they can watch dragon dances. They also spend much time    9.  (visit) their relatives and friends. When people meet, they say to each other “Happy New Year.” You can see   10.  happy they are!

 

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I walked through the door of the office building I worked in. Then I realized that I needed some money so I went to the ________ at the corner of the street.

As I finished and turned to ________ , I saw a wallet on the counter(柜台). The wallet was brown and________three hundred dollars, a driver’s license, and a ________ card. I didn’t know the name on the license, but ________he was, he was going to be in panic.

I went home with the wallet. In my apartment, I ________ the online phone book and found no one to ________ the name on the card in the wallet. I really wanted to ________ the man. If it had been my wallet, I would have been sick to my stomach with ________. I ________  the bank card and became  ________ in thought. ________ , a fresh idea flashed through my mind. On the back was the number to his bank.

“Thank you for ________Wachovia Bank. Can I help you?” “I found a wallet at one of your bank machines today and I am trying to find the ________ .” “That’s very nice of you, sir. Can you________ me the number on the card please?” I did what I was told and asked, “Can you tell me his phone number? I want to contact him to ________  his wallet.” “I’m sorry, sir, but we cannot give out the ________ information of our customers.” “I understand. Can I give you my telephone number? You could call him and tell him who I am.” “I can________ do that, sir.”

I gave her my contact information and hung up. Two days later, a gentleman found me. He ________  thought he would see his wallet again. He was so ________ that he kept saying “thanks” many times.

I smiled all day long. Doing good for others does good for you.

1.A.restaurant      B.bank        C.hotel     D.supermarket

2.A.pass          B.inform     C.watch     D.leave

3.A.existed        B.replaced    C.contained  D.gathered

4.A.name            B.identity   C.record     D.bank

5.A.whoever        B.whatever   C.however   D.whichever

6.A.published       B.checked   C.compared  D.reviewed

7.A.need            B.recognize C.match      D.remember

8.A.blame          B.help        C.follow     D.study

9.A.worry          B.doubt      C.curiosity  D.sadness

10.A.set up        B.gave up     C.picked up  D.put up

11.A.interested    B.confused   C.crazy     D.lost

12.A.Immediately   B.Strangely C.Generally  D.Recently

13.A.visiting       B.choosing    C.calling   D.trusting

14.A.seller        B.designer    C.winner    D.owner

15.A.give          B.send        C.write      D.suggest

16.A.return        B.gain        C.keep      D.confirm

17.A.enough        B.personal   C.special   D.obvious

18.A.certainly      B.usually     C.luckily   D.simply

19.A.often          B.never      C.seldom    D.once

20.A.nervous        B.curious    C.modest    D.grateful

 

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4.   Have you ever thought that people could live on the moon? Maybe you'll discover Earth II someday. Don't look down on new ideas. Everyone's ideas are important. You should welcome them, because new ideas make life better for everyone.

Use the Internet carefully.    5.   But some things on the Internet aren't good for kids, so try to look at Web pages that are good for you. You can use the Web for fun or homework. If you can’t find any good websites for children, here are two: http://kids.eastday.com; http://www. chinakids.net.com

A. If so, don’t do it again!

B. You can do this online for a few hundred dollars.

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E. The Internet can be very useful for your studies.

F. Middle school is going to use a new way to decide who are the top students.

G. The Internet has its advantages and disadvantages.

 

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You can see many big garbage dustbins in the streets. They’re not there for a show, but for you to drop your waste. We should realize that what we do does count. So next time you get that urge to throw gum or a chocolate package out of the car window, or “accidentally” drop as you walk down the street, ask yourself how much waste you’ve been contributing to the environment with that bad habit going on for years.

At home, the first thing we can do to protect the environment is avoid letting water run continuously and make sure that taps(水龙头)are not leaky(漏的),which would help greatly in scrimping. Another is to use energy-saving lights, and turn them off before you leave the rooms. It is not only energy-saving, but also cuts down electricity costs.

Recycling is a method to make items reusable. Many things you want to throw out can be made into new products through the reproducing process. Use your imagination to come up with ways on things that you can use again.

Pass the message of simple ways to save the environment on to kids. Starting with kids is a good way of teaching the message early in their lives, in the hope that they can carry it forward as they grow older.

With environmental protection awareness in mind, we can do what we can, for the results are to have a big effect on the planet. As long as we do our part, the world is one small step closer to being saved.

1. In the first paragraph the author uses “steel monsters” to describe________.

A. huge buildings     B. high mountains

C. big factories       D. characters in fairy stories

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B. protecting the environment should start from childhood.

C. wonderful life comes from environmental protection

D. protecting the environment benefits the country and the people

3.Which of the following is NOT true?

A. The more people do their part, the greener the environment will be.

B. Selling what you don’t want any more is a kind of recycling.

C. To protect the environment may help you save some money.

D. Your bad habits for the environment are a valuable contribution.

4.The passage is mainly about_____________.

A. the use of garbage dustbins

B. how to save water and electricity

C. how to save the environment

D. our current environmental problems

 

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A. Intelligence is given at birth.

B. Intelligence is developed by the environment.

C. Intelligence is fixed at birth, but is developed by the environment.

D. Some people are born clever and others born stupid.

2.It is suggested in this passage that __________.

A. close relations usually have similar intelligence

B. unrelated people are not likely to have similar intelligence

C. the closer the blood relationship between people, the more different they are likely to be  in intelligence

D. people who live in close contact with each other are not likely to have similar degrees of intelligence

3.The example of the twins going to a university and to a factory separately shows_________.

A. the importance of their intelligence

B. the effect of environment on intelligence

C. the importance of their positions

D. the part that birth plays

4.The best title for this article would be “_____________”.

A. On Intelligence

B. What Intelligence Means

C. Born with Intelligence

D. Environment Decides Intelligence

 

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