Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。没出错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1. 没出错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Sunday, it was my father’s funny day. After supper, my father went to see the film. But in our surprise, he came back just about half an hour later. I asked him what was the matter. He smiled and told us about the funny thing what had happened in the cinema. He was sitting in his seat while a woman came to her and said the seat was hers. Surprising, they looked at their ticket carefully, only to find the seats shown in their tickets were the same while the colors were different. So they looked at the tickets carefully. After a while, my father apologized to the woman, saying, “Sorry, I make a mistake. Take this seat, please.” The fact was that his ticket found out under the glass on his desk was for the film a month ago.

Answer

1.the→a

2.in→to

3.what→that

4.while→when

5.her→him

6.Surprising→Surprised

7.ticket→tickets

8.carefully前面加more

9.make→made

10.去掉 out

【解析】

1.the→a考察冠词。句意：a指“范指”，文中指一场电影，不是特指。

2.in→to 考察介词。to our surprise是固定搭配表示“出乎意料”。

3.】what→that考察引导词。句意：我问他发生了什么事。

4.while→when考察连词。句意：他坐在座位上，这时一位女士走过来告诉他座位是她的。

5.her→him 考察人称代词。句意：一位女士走向爸爸，所以用him。

6.Surprising→Surprised 考察形容词。句意：令他们吃惊的是…，V-ed形式修饰人。

7.】ticket→tickets 考察名词复数形式。句意：他们仔细的查看他们的票。

8.】carefully前面加more考察比较级。句意：因此他们更仔细的查看了一下票。

9.make→made考察过去式。文中时态是过去式，前后需保持一致。

10.

考点：短文改错。