Question

书面表达

每个人对待幸福的态度和感觉都不一样，请你就What Is Happiness? 这一话题谈谈你对幸福的看法。主要内容如下：

1.不同的人对幸福有不同的看法(从物质、精神等方面分析)；

2.我对幸福的看法。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer

Happiness means different things to different people. Some people believe that if they are wealthy, they will be able to do anything they want, which means happiness. others believe that holding a high position in the government is happiness. In this way, they have not only money but also power.

However, some people have quite opposite opinions. They value their belief, or their intelligence, or their health, which they think can make them happy.

As for me, happiness is closely tied to my studies, and my family. When I make great progress in studies, and when all the members in my family live in harmony, I will be happy. In my view, it is happiness. (115words)

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放作文。本文要求考生就个人对待幸福的态度和感觉谈谈看法，属于议论文，要使用第三人称和一般现在时。因为只是给出一个大概的提纲，其中的要点都要考生自己组织，所以本文对考生的要求很高。首先要注意谋篇布局，筛选要点；其次要注意写作技巧。建议要点如下：1.幸福对不同的人有不同的含义（物质上、精神上）；2.自己对幸福的理解。建议文章分为两到三段，写作时注意使用高级句式和多样化的句式结构，让文章富有变化。

【名师点睛】

本篇范文语言地道流畅，选词精准。包含所有要点，没有遗漏。时态人称运用准确无误，同时文章中在个人观点方面有很清晰的叙述，体现出考生良好的人生观和世界观。语法方面：定语从句they will be able to do anything they want, which means happiness；动名词结构：holding a high position in the government is happiness.这些语法知识运用娴熟，显示了较强的语法功底，作文句式变得多样；篇章结构方面：范文注意使用however、as for me等串联词来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；短语和搭配方面：范文使用了live in harmony、intelligence、hold a high position.....等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。

考点：考查开放作文