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书面表达 假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛,请按下面文字中的道理完成一篇短文: ...

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假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛,请按下面文字中的道理完成一篇短文:

A drop of water +two drops +many drops =sea

A tree +two trees +many trees = forest

One person +two persons +man persons =society

 

The three sentences show a simple truth : If too many drops of water are put together ,they will become a sea. Many trees standing together form a forest and many people make up a society. It conveys a message to us : A whole is made up of many small parts that are closely related .Nothing or no one could exist alone . The words set us thinking deeply: our society is made up of many people who have different personality and characters. If we want to create a harmonious society, we must live in harmony with others . On the other hand, since everybody is related to others, we should be responsible for what we say and what we do so that we can develop a pleasant relationship with others , which makes it possible for us to enjoy life to the fullest . 【解析】 试题分析:本次作文要求根据文字中的道理写一篇短文。要点包括:A drop of water +two drops +many drops =sea A tree +two trees +many trees = forest One person +two persons +man persons =society 故既要完成任务,又要兼顾形式的要求。 写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:定语从句that are closely related和who have different personality and characters. which makes it possible for us to enjoy life to the fullest宾语从句what we say and what we do. Convey, made up of ,create a harmonious society, in harmony with, to the fullest等词汇及On the other hand等连接词。 考点:任务型作文写作。 【名师点睛】 书面表达写作步骤: 书面表达一般分为三个过程:思维、组织、表达。先是思维,审题想清要用的人称、时态及文章结构,把要写的东西在脑中 思考,要对所给材料进行组织,把这些思维作出整理,使其条理、系统化,但这还是较粗糙的,可能还有一些用词不当或语言错误;最后才是表达,把组织过的材料仔细推敲,确定无问题了再落笔成文。在撰写时要注意主谓一 致,时态呼应,用词贴切等。上述三个过程,最难的是第三个过程,需 要我们有较好的语法知识,掌握一定数量的句型,习惯用语,熟练的写作技巧,这样才能写 出通顺生动的文章来。总之,要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧。平时要多分析范文,多读多背诵,学会恰当地引用和培养自己的语感。  
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As we all know , walking is an useful way of exercising and is beneficial to our health. It can not only reduce the risk of many kinds of diseases but also builds up the bones. It’s safe than many other ways of exercising, especially for the elderly and it’s easy to do without consider rules. Beside, walking can also help us lose weight.

What should we pay attention during the walk? First, we should wear loose clothes or good shoes so that we can relax. Second, we should walk fast enough to cause us to breath with difficulty but still be able to talk. Third, that is very important to walk with our arms moving freely. Most important, we should do it every day.

 

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Whales are beautiful and clever animals. Most people are aware 1._ the fact that commercial (商业的) whaling endangers whales and agree that whales should not be killed to make money. If you whales 2. __ (drag) out of the sea and cut up, you might be shocked. And it might make you reflect on 3. _ whaling should be continued. But there are still a few countries like Iceland 4. _ continue commercial whaling.

In 1883 the first whaling station was set up in Alptafjordur, Iceland. Seeing the 5.__(succeed) of the whaling station, people set up another five on the island between 1896 and 1903. Whale catching reached its limit in 1902, when 1,305 whales were caught6. _ (produce) oil.

7._ban on whaling was passed in Iceland in 1915. Conservation played an effective role in preventing whales from being killed and it was not until 1935 8.__an Icelandic company established another whaling station. Between 1948 and 1975, an average of 250 fin, 65 sei, and 78 sperm whales were taken annually. 9.__(like) the majority of commercial whaling at the time, this operation was based on the sale of frozen meat 10. _ than on oil.

 

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阅读下面短文,从短文后各题所给的四个选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。

We all know that sports may help us become stronger. But their _____ go far beyond this. Research shows that sports that _____ aiming and hitting skills, for example, tennis, badminton and baseball, help children increase _____. They help develop leadership qualities and _____ team spirit in kids. They involve competition. Playing sports teaches them to accept _____ with a positive spirit when they lose a game.

Playing sports does a lot of good to the development of _____ skills. Sports teach you to communicate with people and work together as a _____. Sports improve collective thinking and help develop your planning and organizational skills, too. Sports build _____, since winning a game always gives you a sense of accomplishment.

Playing sports requires you to strategize (制定策略). You need to be very _____to score goals or earn points. You need to _____ strategies to win. You need to judge your competitor’s strategy and revise yours _____ . This certainly involves clever thinking, which sports _____. Studies show that kids who play sports _____do well in school and college.

Playing sports brings you _____. Jumping about, running around, racing to get ahead, _____, falling and standing up again, all of them are a(n) _____ of playing sports. There is no _____to the happiness this brings. _____, sports are a form of exercise which produces happiness molecules (分子) in your body, thus improving your mental health. You can’t be sad_____ playing sports. Sports produce _____energy in you and the people around you.

1.A. courses          B. benefits      C. challenges        D. decisions

2.A. add             B. fit            C. lack               D. involve

3.A. focus            B. courage        C. weight              D. strength

4.A. break          B. shake          C. raise              D. change

5.A. explanations     B. Punishments  C. congratulations    D. failures

6.A. musical          B. social         C. medical             D. technical

7.A. team             B. nation         C. class               D. family

8.A. friendship       B. judgment       C. confidence          D. enthusiasm

9.A. brave            B. smart         C. generous           D. humorous

10.A. put off        B. make up        C. take over          D. work out

11.A. accordingly    B. generally    C. equally             D. largely

12.A. prepare         B. recognize     C. encourage           D. promise

13.A. formally        B. frequently    C. naturally           D. completely

14.A. hope            B. honor          C. pride             D. pleasure

15.A. cheering      B. dreaming       C. chatting            D. quarreling

16.A. case           B. field         C. part                D. amount

17.A. method         B. match         C. risk                D. trouble

18.A. For example     B. As a result    C. In addition         D. In other words

19.A. while           B. before       C. unless            D. since

20.A. serious       B. nervous        C. positive            D. creative

 

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根据短文内容,从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。

Top reasons to become a teacher

Teaching is a special calling. It is not a job well-suited to everyone. In fact, many new teachers leave within the first 3-5 years of teaching. However, there are many rewards that come with this career.

Student successes

1.   Seeing a student who didn’t understand a concept and then learned it through your help can be very rewarding. And when you reach that student that others have written off as being unteachable, this can truly be worth all the headaches that come with the job.

Keep learning

2.     I remember my first year teaching history. I thought I knew what I was doing. However, the students’ questions just made me dig deeper and learn more.

Daily humor

Sometimes it will be silly jokes you make up as you teach that might get a laugh from your students. 3.   And sometimes students will come out with the funniest statements without realizing what they’ve said.

4.  

As a teacher, you will have a couple of months off in the summer. Further, you typically get a few weeks off during the Spring Festival, which can be a huge benefit and provide much-needed rest time.

Job security

5.    If you are willing to work hard in any type of environment, you’ll find that you can always get a teaching job.

A. Stay younger

B. School holidays

C. The world will always need teachers.

D. This is often what drives teachers to continue.

E. Sometimes it will be jokes that kids share with you.

F. You will never learn a topic better than when you start teaching it.

G. During the holidays, teachers can often choose to travel around and just relax themselves.

 

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Darek Fidyka, a 38-year-old Bulgarian, had been paralysed (瘫痪的) from the chest down for four years after a knife attack. Scientists from Britain and Poland took cells from his nose, transplanted (移植) them into his back and re-grew his spinal cord (脊髓). Now he can walk and even drive a car. The doctors were delighted but said it was the first step in a long journey.

The breakthrough came after 40 years of research by Professor Geoff Raisman, who found that cells had the possibility to repair damage to nasal (鼻腔的) nerves, the only part of the nervous system that constantly re-grows. “The idea was to take something from an area where the nervous system can repair itself, and does so throughout life, and put it into an area that doesn’t repair itself,” Professor Raisman said.

Polish doctors injected the nasal cells into Mr Fidyka’s spinal cord above and below the injury and used some nerves from his ankle to form a bridge across the damaged tissue. The nasal cells appear to have caused the spinal nerves to repair themselves.

Professor Raisman achieved this with rats in the late 1990s, but this is his greatest success. “I think the moment of discovery for me was Christmas in 1997 when I first saw a rat that couldn’t control its hand put its hand out to me. That was an exciting moment, because I realized then that my belief that the nervous system could be repaired was true.”

Doctors chose the easiest case for their first attempt it might not work for others. But there is a real sense of hope that an idea once thought impossible has been realized.

David Nicholls, who helped provide money for the breakthrough, said information about the breakthrough would be made available to researchers across the globe.

“What you’ve got to understand is that for three million paralysed people in the world today, the world looks a totally brighter place than it did yesterday,” he said.

1.Why did Professor Geoff Raisman choose cells from the nose?

A. The nervous system in the nose can repair itself.

B. Cells in the nose can be easily transplanted.

C. Cells in the nose re-produce rapidly.

D. He just wanted to give it a try.

2.What made Professor Geoff Raisman believe the nervous system can be repaired?

A. His study on animals.

B. His operation on a paralysed patient.

C. His sudden thoughts about Christmas.

D. His unusual experience with a sick rat.

3.David Nicholls’ words suggest that _____.

A. the world is becoming better and brighter

B. paralysed people have the hope of recovery

C. the report of the breakthrough will be published soon

D. researchers across the globe will carry out the operation

 

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