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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Patience is greatly important in our daily life. Once, I waited for a bus come at a stop.30 minutes passed, but no bus came. Both upset and annoying , I decided to walk by foot. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minutes , I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus,I would have to wait for another 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put  it in. Now, whenever I am close to losing my impatience, I will think of this experience.

 

1.在bus 和come 中加 to 2.annoying 改为annoyed 3.by改为on 4.when改为than 5.minutes 改为minute 6.a 改为the 7.do 改为did 8.possible改为possibly 9.去掉it 10.impatience改为patience 【解析】 试题分析:作者通过自己等车的亲身经历,告诉我们耐心在生活中的重要。 1.在bus和come中加to.考查不定式。此处指我等着公交的到来,不定式在句中做宾补,故在bus 和come 中加 to. 2.annoying改为annoyed.考查形容词。此处和upset并列,annoying“讨厌的”修饰物,annoyed“烦闷的”,修饰人,此处修饰I,故annoying改为annoyed. 3.by改为on.考查介词。此处是固定短语on foot“步行”,故by改为on. 4.when改为than.考查固定短语。no sooner …than“一……就”是固定短语,故when改为than. 5.minutes改为minute.考查名词。one more minute “再多一分钟”,由one修饰名词用单数,故minutes改为minute. 6.a 改为the.考查冠词。此处指下一班车,用the next bus,故a 改为the. 7.do改为did.考查时态。句意:只有在那时我才意识到我的问题。此处指当时的情况要用过去时,故do改为did. 8.possible改为possibly.考查副词。此处修饰动词waste要用副词,故possible改为possibly. 9.去掉it.。考查定语从句。句中包含定语从句,先行词是effort在定语从句中做宾语,it是多余的,故去掉it. 10..考查词意。句意:无论什么时候当我将近失去耐心时,我就会想到这次经历。故impatience改为patience. 【名师点睛】 短文改错答题技巧: 一、查时态是否一致 时态错误几乎是每年短文改错中必设的改错题。要有目的地去检查文中的每一个谓语动词的时态与上下文、语境以及该句的时间状语是否相符和一致。第77小题考查时态。句意:只有在那时我才意识到我的问题。此处指当时的情况要用过去时,故do改为did. 二、查主谓是否一致 在检查谓语动词的时态和语态是否正确的同时,还要注意检查该动词在人称和数上是否与主语保持了一致。 主谓语一致的情况较为复杂,考生平时学习要留心归纳。有些特殊句式的主谓一致问题很容易被忽视,如倒装句、关系代词在定语从句中做主语的情况等,答题时要高度重视。 三、查指代是否一致 对于短文中出现的每一个代词都要查一下它所指代的内容以及在句中的作用,注意其数、格、词性是否正确和前后一致,包括人称代词、指示代词、反身代词、关系代词以及疑问代词等。指代错误也是高考改错题中常设的改错题。 四、查平行结构是否平行一致 由and,or,but,either…or…,neither…nor…,not only …but also…,as well as等并列连词和词 组连接的结构可称为平行结构。平行结构在词性、时态、非谓语动词的形式上往往要求前后一致。答题时要留心平行结构前后是否对等平行,这也是常设的错误。 五、查名词的单复数与修饰词语或上下文是否一致 名词数的错误也是高考常设的改错题。要查一下名词是否可数,与其修饰语是否一致。第75小题考查名词。one more minute “再多一分钟”,由one修饰名词用单数,故minutes改为minute. 六、查行文逻辑是否一致 查这方面的错误应从文章整体内容出发,通篇考虑,以行为单位是难以发现这种错误的。逻辑不一致主要是由肯定与否定、关联词语以及动词(如come与go,take与bring)的误用所造成的,应多从这方面去查找。 总之,短文改错要注意联系上下文和时态的变化,做题时应以句子为单位,同时兼顾改错的原则。这个原则就是不能改变原意,不能轻易去掉动词、名词等实词,去掉的通常是固定搭配结构中多余的部分。同样,增加的词也是固定搭配中缺少的部分或者是定语从句中的先行词或介词,第79小题考查定语从句。句中包含定语从句,先行词是effort在定语从句中做宾语,it是多余的,故去掉it. 短文改错中名词的错误多是可数名词和不可数名词的混用;形容词的错误一般是比较级和最高级的混用;副词的错误一般来说是副词与形容词误用。第78小题考查副词。此处修饰动词waste要用副词,故possible改为possibly.
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