Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It was raining. In his way home from school, Peter saw an old man which was walking with difficulty in the rain without an umbrella. Peter goes up to him and offered to share the umbrellas with him. The old man in poor health, so Peter tried to hold the umbrella. And he was so short to hold it high enough. While wondering what to do, he saw the old man’s stick and had an idea. He tied the stick to the handle of the umbrella and made it the longer. Then we shared the umbrella. Peter was happily.

Answer

1.In →On

2.which →who/that

3.goes → went

4.umbrellas →umbrella

5.in poor前加 was

6.And → But

7.so →too

8.the longer中取掉 the

9.we → they

10.happily → 改为 happy

【解析】

试题分析：通过阅读并修改此短文，考查学生对固定搭配，动词时态和语态，名词的单复数问题，以及复合宾语的辨别和运用。

1.In → On 考查固定搭配。on one’s way home意思是: 在回家的路上，所以用On。

2.which →who/that 考查定语从句的关系词。先行词是人an old man，在定语从句中做主语应该用who/that。which代物或这个句子的意思。

3.goes → went 考查动词时态的一致性。全文用一般过去时，这里应该一致。

4.umbrellas → umbrella 考查名词的单复数问题。句意是两人共用一把伞，所以应该是单数umbrella。

5.in poor前加 was 考查句子的成分分析。so是并列连词，前后都应该是句子，前面的in poor health是介词短语不能单独做谓语，不行有be动词，这里是单数过去式，所以加was。

6.And → But 考查形容词的区别。delighting物令人高兴；delighted人感到快乐。本句的主语是人，意思是：这个懒人很高兴，所以用delighted。

7.so → too 考查固定搭配。 too…to 太…不能。意思是：他太矮了举得不够高。

8.the longer中取掉 the 考查冠词。本句的意思是： 把伞和拐杖接在一起让伞变长。 the longer 的意思是: 较长的那一个。

9.we → they 考查代词一致性。这里是Peter和老人合用一把伞。主语是they。

10.happily → happy考查形容词。 Peter 很高兴：be happy 是系表结构做谓语。be动词后应该用形容词。

考点：语篇理解以及语法知识。