Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

A woman was taken to the hospital. While having an operation, she had a nearly death experience. Seeing God, she asked how this was it. God said, “No, you had another 40 years.”On recovery the women decided to have a plastic surgery. She had someone change her hair color, thinking since she had so many time to live, she'd better make full use from it. Finally she got out of the hospital. While crossing the street, she killed by an ambulance speeded by. Arriving in the front of God, she demanded，“They said I had another 40 years!” God replied, “But I didn't recognize you.”

Answer

1.nearly---near

2.how--- if/whether

3.had---have

4.women---woman

5.many---much

6.from---of

7.在she后加was

8.speeded---speeding

9.把in the front of中的the去掉

10.They---You

【解析】

1.nearly---near 此处是形容词修饰名词，故把nearly---near。

2.how--- if/whether 句意：她问这是否是它。根据上下文可知把how--- if/whether。

3.had---have 这是一个直接引语，根据句意可知用一般现在时态，“你有过了40年。”故把had---have。

4.women---woman 根据前面的A woman，可知是单数形式，故把women---woman。

5.many---much time是不可数名词，故把many---much。

6.from---of 固定搭配：make full use of 充分利用，故把from---of。

7.在she后加was 句意：当穿过街道的时候，她被一辆快速经过的救护车杀死了。此处用一般过去时态的被动语态，故在she后加was。

8.speeded---speeding 此处是现在分词作定语，表示主动，故把speeded---speeding。

9.把in the front of中的the去掉 到达God前面，故把in the front of中的the去掉。

10.

【知识归纳】

有无冠词不一样

in front of 在---前面，in the front of 在---前部；in hospital住院，in the/a hospital在医院里；in charge of 负责管理，in the charge of 由---负责管理；in posession of 拥有，in the posession of被---拥有；by sea乘船， by the sea在海边。

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