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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Baymax(大白) is a health care robot in film Big Hero 6. He becomes popular with people around the world when the film was first shown. He is high intelligent, but he never harms human beings. He is devoted, sweet but extremely considerate towards all patient.

Baymax is created by Hiro. Baymax is an inflatable white robot, that can detect vital statistics about a person’s health. He is such fat that he looks very cute. His structure is like the appearance of a big marshmallow(棉花糖). Baymax is famous for its warm hug. Equipping with a heating system, his body warms anyone lying on him. When his battery is dying, he is like a drunken man, which makes the audience to laugh.

 

1.in∧film ∧the 2.becomes—became 3.high—highly 4.第二个but—and 5.patient—patients 6.that—who 7.such—so 8.its—his 9.equipping—equipped 10.划掉 to 【解析】 试题分析:考查说明文阅读,本文介绍了电影Big Hero 6中著名的机器人大白的情况。 1.】in∧film ∧the 考查定冠词。本句中使用定冠词the表示特指电影Big Hero 6。 2.】becomes—became 考查时态。本句的时间状语从句when the film was first shown中使用了一般过去时,所以主句中也要使用一般过去时became。 3.high—highly 考查副词。副词highly表示抽象意义的“高”,而high表示“具体意义上的高”。“他智力很高。”属于抽象含义的“高”,所以使用副词highly。 4.第二个but—and 考查连词。句意:他和热情,很甜蜜,对所有的病人都很体贴。上下文之间是并列关系,所以使用and连接这三个形容词。 5.patient—patients 考查名词单复数。形容词“all所有的”,可以修饰可数名词复数形式。句意:他对所有的病人都很体贴。 6.that—who 考查非限制性定语从句。本句中who指代先行词an inflatable white robot,引导非限制性定语从句,并在句中做主语。关系代词that是不能引导非限制性定语从句的。 7.such—so 考查固定句式。句式“so...that....如此....以至于....”其中的so后面要接形容词或副词;“such...that....如此....以至于....”其中的such的后面要接名词或者名词短语。本句中形容词fat的前面要使用so。 8.its—his 考查代词。本文中作者使用了拟人的写作手法,把大白当成一个人,所以使用his指代他。 9.equipping—equipped 考查固定短语。形容词短语be equipped with配备有....;本句中形容词短语equipped with对句子主语his body进行解释说明。 10. 【名师点睛】 本文11. 1.人称代词应注意:①不能错用格式②上下文单复数一致。 2.指示代词应注意。①this,that指单数,these,those表示复数。②this,that可作副词用,意思相当于so.③Such,same多用于固定结构,例如Such„as/that,the same„as/that. 3.关系代词不能跟关系副词混在一起。 4.熟记常用的不定代词,如one,a11,both,either,neither,each,many,mach,little,few,other,another,something,nothing等,并注意以下几点: ①这些词本身不同的意思。 ②若在定语从句中做先行词,关系代词应用that. ③something,anything,nothing常看作单数,代词用it修饰他们的形容词应后置。 Ⅰ 高考最新热门题 1.(NMET20典型例题d every year more and more people start a stamp collection of your own. 将your改为their.their指上方中的people. 命题目的与解题技巧:此题考查代词的基本用法。代词表语言中使用极为频繁,它的用法看似简单,其实不易,在处理此类题时,一定要根据特定语言环境中上下文的联系排除干扰,正确分析句子结构,理解句意。 2.(NMET 20典型例题For example, you can find such information like how to kill people. 答案:1ikeas,suell..as像·.....——样。 答案:me→myself.宾语应用反身代词。 Ⅱ题点经典类型题 1.(典型例题) Sometimes I even coant to kill me indeed. 答案 me→myself, kill myself 自杀 2.(典型例题断)To his surprise, Li Ping found the old man waiting ron her. 答案:his→her.Li Ping是个女孩。 3.(典型例题)There have always been people have looked ron adventure. 答案:在people后加who, 关系代词who引导一个定语从句修饰people. 4.(典型例题附中模拟) Other reason lies in students' bad habits. 答案:Other→Another.other后面跟复数,another后面跟单数表示不确定的另一个。 考点:考查短文改错
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We all look up __1.___ heroes: men or women of outstanding courage or talent. They have performed  __2.___(hero)acts such as rescuing a person from a burning building or landing on the moon. Instead of talking about “human heroes”, the examples _3.__ (share) here are other types of heroes.

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___9.__ 8-year-old gorilla rescued a boy who fell into the gorilla habitat at a zoo. The boy fell 18 feet onto the cement floor but the gorilla, carrying her own baby on her back, ___10.__ (hold) the boy in her arms, managing to take him to the zoo keepers.

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A decade or so later, a similar   ________ appeared. I drove him to college. I tried to think of something to say to give him________ and confidence as he started this new life. Again, words ________ me.

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1.6 When we can read what others are saying unconsciously, we can deal with things---at work and at home before they become problems.

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A. Use hand gestures carefully.

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B. By operating the American Humane Association.

C. By collecting money for the National Dog Mill Rescue.

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A. Unsatisfied.     B. Sympathetic.

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3.Why was Harley blind in one eye

A. She was bom with it.

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D. She was washed heavily in a cage.

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A. The author continued her volunteer work in the hospital until eighth-grade.

B. The author met Mr. Gillespie at a gas station several years later.

C. Mr. Gillespie recognized the author’s voice the moment he met her.

D. No one in the hospital believed that Mr. Gillespie would recover from his coma.

4.Which of the following statements best summarizes the point of the story?

A. Those with faith in themselves will succeed.

B. If you spread happiness you will be happy yourself.

C. Respect people and they will try hard to improve.

D. Kindness is loving people more than they deserve.

 

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