Question

书面表达

假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容：

1. 简况：长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺；

2. 位置：天安门广场南面；

3. 交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线；

4. 特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。

参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street

当当车 trolley car

地铁 subway

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。

Dear Sarah,

Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen street. Here is something about it.

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Thank you !

Yours sincerely,

Li hua

Answer

Dear Sarah,

Thank you for your letter for asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it.

Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old. Along this 800-meter street, there are more than 300 shops. As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian’anmen Square, it’s very convenient to get there by bus. You may take Buses No. 17, 69 or 59. Subway Line 2 has a stop there too.

Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to chatters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life. I’m sure you‘ll like it.

Yours sincerely,

Li hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类短文。本文要求考生以李华的身份给美国朋友Sarah写信，介绍改建后前门大街的情况。所以本文使用一般现在时和第三人称。要点：简况：长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺；位置：天安门广场南面；交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线；特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。 建议文章分为两段，第一段是书信的串联格式，第二段详细介绍前门大街的情况。写作时一定要注意使用多样化的句式，不能单一使用陈述句。在介绍具体内容的时候，要使用适当的连接词把各要点串联起来。

【名师点睛】

范文结构合理，选词精确，句式丰富，灵活使用了陈述句和其他句式。文章在没有中国式英语思维，语言流畅地道。

语法方面：定语从句also to chatters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life.；状语从句As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian’anmen Square......这些语法知识运用娴熟，显示了较强的语法功底，作文句式变得多样，表达更有条理；短语和搭配方面：范文使用了It is convenient....等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。

考点：考查提纲类作文