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书面表达 假设你叫李华,现是武汉大学的一名新生。请你根据以下提示,给你中学的英语...

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假设你叫李华,现是武汉大学的一名新生。请你根据以下提示,给你中学的英语老师李老师写一封感谢信,表达对他的感谢。词数100左右。

提示:

1.对英语李老师表达感谢。

2.回顾在校时考试的压力、堆积如山的作业和父母的高期望让你很沮丧,多亏老师的鼓励和耐心指导,让你成绩提高,终于实现梦想。

3.希望老师的学生都能进入理想大学。

 

Dear Mr Li, I’m very excited to write this letter to express my gratitude to you. I am now a freshman of Wuhan University, which I have been dreaming about. If it had not been for your help, I might not have been admitted by my dream school. Mr Li, I still remember the days when you taught me English. At that time, the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectations from my parents made me depressed. Thanks for your encouragement and guidance, I made progress and achieved my dream finally. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Thank you for your help and support again and wish you all the best! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 试题分析:本文属于提纲作文。要求考生以李华的身份给中学的英语老师李老师写一封感谢信,表达对他的感谢。所以本文使用第一人称和一般过去时的时态。要点:1.现在是武汉大学的新生的我很感谢老师对我的帮助。2.回顾在校时考试的压力、堆积如山的作业和父母的高期望让你很沮丧,多亏老师的鼓励和耐心指导,让你成绩提高,终于实现梦想。3.希望老师的学生都能进入理想大学。本文所有的要点都已经给了出来,写作的时候一定要注意不能逐句翻译,要在各要点之间添加适当的要点让文章更流畅。建议文章分为三段,各要点自成一段。 【名师点睛】 范文很好完成了文字提示中要完成的所有任务,包含所有的要点,并有适当的发挥。文章结构合理,语言流畅地道。全文没有中国式英语思维,体现出考生很好的驾驭英语的能力。文章层层推进,有理有据,情感真挚。语法方面:定语从句.... , which I have been dreaming about;虚拟语气If it had not been for your help, I might not have been admitted by my dream school.......这些语法知识运用娴熟,显示了较强的语法功底,作文句式变得多样,表达更有条理;短语和搭配方面:范文使用了make progress、be admitted by.....短语和搭配,使作文的内容变得充实。 考点:考查提纲作文  
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