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假如你是李华,是英国某所学校的交换生,你于2015年10月14日在商店购买的电脑...

假如你是李华,是英国某所学校的交换生,你于2015年10月14日在商店购买的电脑坏了,请你根据下列提示给商店客服写一封信。

主要内容:

1.写作目的;

2.描述具体情况(黑屏,无法使用);

3.建议解决办法(更换或退钱);

注意:1. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;2. 词数100左右。

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua, an exchange student from China. _____________________________

_______________________________________________.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I’m writing to complain about the quality of the computer which I purchased from your store on October 14, 2015. It unexpectedly went wrong a few days after I bought it. The monitor turned out to be a black screen while I was preparing an important report. I tried to restart it according to the instructions, but it still failed to work. Therefore, I’m sure there is something wrong with the computer. I am hoping that you direct me to a store where I may return the faulty item for a new one within the next 3 days. Since your store has gained a good reputation for customer satisfaction, I am confident you will process my complaint at your earlier convenience. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】 试题分析:考查半开放作文。本文要求考生以李华的身份给商店写信。因为2015年10月14日在该商店购买的电脑坏了,所以本文要使用第一人称和一般过去时为主的时态。文字提示中只是给出了一个大概的要点提示,很多内容要考生自己添加,这也是本文较难的原因。建议要点如下:1.写作目的:投诉所购买电脑质量太差;2.描述具体情况:黑屏,无法使用;建议解决办法:最好是退货还钱,如果实在不行就换一台新电脑,并要求保证质量;建议文章分成两部分,要点一为第一部分,另外两个要点为第二部分。在写作的时候一定要注意使用多样化的句式,让文章富有变化。同时注意不要出现中国式英语的思维。 【名师点睛】 本篇范文很好地完成了文字提示要的所有任务,覆盖了所有内容要点。文章所使用语言地道流畅,时态和人称使用准确无误。全文没有中国式英语的思维。写作中适当添加了相关内容,让文章更自然。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑,也应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 语法方面使用了定语从句... which I purchased from your store on October 14, 2015;状语从句The monitor turned out to be a black screen while I was preparing an important report.显示了考生较强的语法功底,作文句式变得多样,表达更有条理;短语和搭配方面:范文使用了go wrong、turn out、gain a good reputation.....等短语和搭配,使作文的内容变得充实。 考点:考查半开放作文  
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