Question

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

In a small village, the parents of a little boy were very depressed due to his bad temper(脾气). The boy used to get angry very easily and hurt others with his words. While he forgot what he spoke in anger, his friends and neighbours avoided him.

His mother and father tried many ways to make him give up his anger and develop kindness. Unfortunately, all their attempts failed. Finally, the boy’s father came up with an idea.

One day, his father gave him a huge bag of nails, asking him to hammer one nail to the fence every time he lost his temper. The little boy found it funny and accepted what his father had said.

His anger drove him to hammer 30 nails into the fence on the first day! Over the next few days, the little boy found it very difficult to hammer the nails into the fence and decided to control his temper.

Gradually, the number of nails hammered into the fence was reduced and the day arrived when he hammered none!

Now, his father told him to remove the nails every day as he had controlled his anger. Several days passed and the boy was able to pull out most of the nails from the fence.

The father appreciated him and asked him, pointing to one of the holes, “What do you see there?”

The boy replied, “A hole in the fence?”

He told the boy, “The nails were your bad temper and they were hammered into people. You can remove the nails but still see the holes in the fence. The fence never looks the same! It has scars all over! Your bad temper and anger were like that! Use words for good. Use them to show your heart!”

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Answer

One possible version:

One possible version:

There was a little bad-tempered boy in a small village（要点一）. To help him give up his anger, his father asked him to hammer a nail into a fence whenever he became angry （要点二）and remove one whenever he didn’t lose his temper（要点三）. Gradually, the boy could control his temper（要点四）. This story tells us just like holes in a fence, a bad temper and anger can hurt others forever（要点五）.

【解析】

试题分析：

本文要求对所给内容写一个概要，写作时注意抓住重点主题句，把文章所表达的信息用简洁的句子完整的表述。注意语法结构和词汇的准确性，上下文的连贯并用自己的语言表达。

【亮点说明】

文章对原文要点的理解和呈现情况比较好，按照故事发展的顺序展开，用几个简洁的句子把文章内容表述的非常清晰完整。文章使用了很好的短语和句子给文章增色bad-tempered脾气坏的；To help him give up his anger为了帮助他克服坏脾气（不定式作状语）；whenever he became angry无论何时他感到生气时。

考点：考察概要写作。