短文改错
请改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I love camping. It is my favoritest way to spend the summer vacation. Last year, my family and I went camping in the countryside. It was one of the most excited experiences I had never had. We slept in a tent and went on a long walk every day. We cook over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully. For a whole week, I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night, I heard the gentle wind blowing in the tree, and I felt so peaceful. It doesn’t cost many to camp, and what I believe it’s the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty.
阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。
The“selfie”is used to describe the self-taken photo，often from a smartphone．Someone takes about 10 selfies each time he does，and he only ends up___1.___（post）one or two of those．He picks the one that he feels make him look the___2.__（good）．In that picture，he gains confidence．For that moment，everything bad or terrible that has happened to him___3.__（remove），because that smile is what gives him the___4.___（determine）to love himself．
I read__5.___poem recently and the young man said，“If I ask you__6.____you love，the answers will most likely roll off your tongue．You love to read．You love to write．You love your mom，you daughter，or your best friend．How long do you think you can go on and on before you say ‘I love___7.___（I）’？”
That statement hit me like a ton of bricks．I’ve struggled with confidence all my life．I still do．And in__8.___way am I saying that taking a selfie is a gateway___9.__confidence． __10.___，the selfie does deserve some credit for allowing individuals to express themselves．
阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项(A、B、C、D)中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
“Paul must have been trying to carry his waste paper to garbage can and dropped a few pieces.” I ____ , picking them up. ____later I found more pieces. No quiet sighing this time. I ____,“Who is throwing garbage?” No answer. Instead, I saw more bits of paper ____ floating down from upstairs. Looking up, I saw my seven-year-old son, Paul.
“Stop making a mess.” “It’s not a mess. They’re ____.” “Sorry, what did you say?” I hadn’t heard him clearly.
He didn’t answer me. Paul has autism (自闭症) and ____answers a question, especially when he’s ____attentively on something else. He ran down the stairs. “Where are my other butterflies?” he asked, ____around. Every time Paul ____ five or more words together, my heart says a ____of thanks. But lately he seems to ____that the benefits of forming complete sentences when communicating are ____of the effort.
Butterflies. Of course. I rushed to ____them from the garbage, ____them off and handed them to my young artist. “Want to see them ____again?” he asked with a shy smile. “Oh yes! They’re beautiful.” I whispered. He ran back upstairs to float his ____down again. They really did look like beautiful butterflies.
That day Paul ____me to look up at ____instead of down at garbage. How many other masterpieces (杰作) do I miss because I’m too caught up in my ____to take time to appreciate what’s right in front of me? ____is not what happens to us. It’s how we look at it. Now, I look up.
1.A. laughed B. sighed C. amazed D. shouted
2.A. Days B. Years C. Moments D. Weeks
3.A. called out B. turned up C. got in D. added to
4.A. angrily B. silently C. loudly D. peacefully
5.A. planes B. papers C. leaves D. butterflies
6.A. rarely B. frequently C. willingly D. eagerly
7.A. devoted B. depended C. focused D. addicted
8.A. showing B. looking C. playing D. drawing
9.A. spells B. puts C. pushes D. accumulates
10.A. sound B. remark C. report D. prayer
11.A. refuse B. hear C. mind D. realize
12.A. worthy B. aware C. fond D. typical
13.A. hide B. destroy C. rescue D. remove
14.A. tore B. dusted C. cut D. seized
15.A. throw B. flow C. land D. fly
16.A. masterpieces B. schoolwork C. inventions D. imagination
17.A. reminded B. forced C. intended D. permitted
18.A. mistakes B. weaknesses C. beauty D. scenery
19.A. amusement B. housework C. communication D. homework
20.A. Happiness B. Failure C. Success D. Life
根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填人空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。
Do you struggle with business writing? Are teams and individuals asking for help with their business writing skills? 1. Since 1990, we have been helping employees and managers write better.
Everything written in business reflects the image of the company and the writer. 2. This means organizing ideas well, checking that the language is accurate and that the presentation is professional. Writing successfully is always the result of careful planning.
Before you start writing, you need to decide why you are writing and what you hope to achieve. This will help you decide what to include in your writing and whether to write an e-mail, a letter or perhaps a report.
Meanwhile, think about readers. 3. The structure of what you write can guide readers and help them understand the content of your writing so that they can respond.
While you are writing, you need to think about how you organize your ideas. Writing a report may involve presenting data and linking complex ideas; writing a memo (备忘录) may involve describing a situation and dealing with ways of improving it. You need to understand how to construct paragraphs. 4.
After you have finished writing comes the very important process of revising, checking and correcting.
5. You will find plenty of useful information about effective business writing. In our courses, participants get tools, tips, techniques, job aids, and follow-up resources to help them write better.
A. Contact us.
B. Assess your skills here.
C. Here comes the good news.
D. It will help you choose appropriate structures.
E. A range of words can be used to link your ideas.
F. Spelling mistakes should be checked and corrected.
G. So it is very important that writing is done to the highest standards.
Most of us spend our lives seeking the natural world. We go fishing, sit in the garden, have a picnic, live in the suburbs or go to the seaside. The most popular leisure activity in Britain is going for a walk. When joggers jog, they don’t run the streets. Every one of them tend to go to the park or the river.
But despite this, our children are growing up nature deprived (剥夺). I spent my boyhood climbing trees. These days, children are robbed of these ancient freedoms, due to problems like crime, traffic, the loss of the open spaces and strange new ideas about what is best for children, that is to say, things that can be bought, rather than things that can be found.
The truth is to be found elsewhere. A study in the US: families had moved to better housing and the children were assessed for ADHD—attention deficit hyperactivity disorder (多动症). Those whose accommodation had more natural views showed an improvement of 19%; those who had the same improvement in material surroundings but no nice view improved just 4%.
ADHD is one of the great problems of modern childhood. One study after another indicates that contact with nature gives huge benefits to ADHD children. However, we spend money on drugs rather than on green places.
The life of old people is measurably better when they have access to nature. The increasing concern for the growing population of old people is in quality rather than quantity of years. And study after study finds that a garden is the single most important thing in finding that quality. Even problems with crime and aggressive behavior are reduced when there is contact with the natural world.
We need the wild world. It is essential to our well-being, our health and our happiness.
1.According to the author, people enjoy ________ to seek nature.
A. jogging on the street
B. sitting in the garden
C. shopping in the supermarket
D. running in the gym
2.From the second paragraph, we can see that ________.
A. adults deprive the children of their rights to approach nature
B. climbing trees will certainly do good to the children
C. children probably spend less time in nature nowadays
D. children tend to be happier as a result of their material satisfaction
3.In what way do people benefit from their contact with nature?
A. Children with ADHD can be cured.
B.A garden nearby improves the quality of old people’s life.
C. Problems with crime and violent behavior will easily be solved.
D. Children’s performance at school is greatly improved.
4.What is the main idea of this passage?
A. Access to nature improves our life.
B. Nature treats children with ADHD.
C. Getting close to nature reduces crime.
D. Man can’t live without natural areas.
A great Loss-Shirley Temple dies at 85
February 12,2014
BY DERRIK J. lANG, Associated Press
Shirley Temple Black, who died on February 10th at age 85,wasn’t just a child star. She was THE child star—the sweet little girl whose shining smile helped illumine some of the darkest days the US has known during the Great Depression.
It’s hard today to imagine the super star Shirley was once “America’s Little Darling”. She sang and danced her way to the top of the box office in such films as Bright Eyes, Curly Top and Heidi. By 1940, she had appeared in 43 films. Temple teamed with Bill Robison in four movies, and their dance on the stairs in The Little Colon is still a legendary film moment.
In the 1930s, her name on a movie introduction assured (保证) a packed house. She inspired dolls, dresses, dishes—even a drink (alcohol-free, of course).
US President Franklin D. Roosevelt once famously said that “as long as our country has Shirley Temple, we will be all right.”
Unlike so many of today’s child stars, Temple didn’t end up with her name appearing across the headlines for bad behaviors. Instead of getting her photos on front pages or struggling with drugs and alcohol, Temple went on to a second career in diplomacy (外交) , including presidential appointments as ambassador to Ghana.
She surprised a lot of people who doubted her with her grace, knowledge and eagerness to serve. In fact, her career in public service (20 years) was longer than her career in movies (19). The role she valued most, however, was as wife, mother, grandmother and great-grandmother.
The world has lost a treasured Hollywood legend. But her movies will allow that little dynamic figure to continue charming audiences for a very long time.
1.The word “illumine” in Paragraph l means ________.
A. shorten B. sweeten
C. strengthen D. brighten
2.Temple, as a child movie star, can best be described as ________.
A. sweet and lively B. gentle and kind
C. smart and knowledgeable D. shy and attractive
3.What part did she regard as the most important in her life?
A. A top movie star. B. A businesswoman.
C. Her family role. D. Her diplomacy career.
4.Where does this passage possibly come from?
A. A biography. B. A newspaper.
C. A magazine. D. A poster.
