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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(满分5 manfen5.com), 并在其下面写出改加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在改词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Mary’s friend Millie had been trying to lose weight for years. She was so afraid of being laughed by others that she followed one diet after others, but none of them real worked. She felt sad and hopeless about herself. Mary encouraged her to turn to his doctor for help. Finally, she followed her doctor's advices and began to eat a simple and balanced diet. She eats fruits and vegetables and avoided high-fat food. In addition, she joined an exercise class. She worked out three times a week. At the first, she felt tired. But encouraging by her friends, she chose to stick to it and eventually she reached her goal. Best of all, she is able to stay at her ideal weight now. That is why she has developed health habits in her daily life.

 

1.laugh 的后面加at 2.others 改成another 3.real 改成really 4.his 改成her 5.advices 改成advice 6.eats 改成ate 7.At the first, 去掉the 8.encouraging 改成encouraged 9.why 改成because 10.health 改成healthy 【解析】 1.】laugh 的后面加at 固定词组:laugh at sb.嘲笑某人,所以在laugh 的后面加at。 2.others 改成another 固定词组:one after another一个接一个,故把others 改成another。 3.real 改成really 副词修饰动词,故把real 改成really。 4.his 改成her 句意:玛丽鼓励她去求助她的医生。可知把his 改成her。 5.advices 改成advice 因为advice是不可数名词,所以把advices 改成advice。 6.eats 改成ate 上下文联系可知此处是一般过去时态,故把eats 改成ate。 7.At the first, 去掉the 固定词组:at first起初,开始。故把At the first,中的the去掉。 8.encouraging 改成encouraged 句意:她受到她朋友们的鼓励。可知she和encourage之间是被动关系,故把encouraging 改成encouraged。 9.why 改成because 句意:那是因为她已经养成了健康的生活习惯。故把why 改成because。 10. 【知识归纳】 在寻找短文改错中的错误时,我们可以使用“四查法”来寻找错误: 1. 左顾右盼查名词。考生应注意搜寻名词之前及其本身出现的错误,还要看该名词前面是否缺限定词、该用何种限定词,尤其要查名词前冠词的使用情况。当名词前面有形容词修饰时更要加倍注意。 例如: Your knowledges of Greece can help the whole class. (把knowledges改为knowledge) 本文11. 改成advice 因为advice是不可数名词,所以把advices 改成advice 2. “语(态)”、“时(态)”俱进查动词。考生应认真分析动词时态、语态的使用是否正确,尤其要根据上下文所提供的时间信息,仔细推敲,从而选用正确的动词时态形式。 12. 改成ate 上下文联系可知此处是一般过去时态,故把eats 改成ate。 3. 启承转合查连词。若要使文章结构严谨,应在文中使用各种启承转合的连词。这些连词能使文章在结构上和意义上通顺流畅。例如: It started to rise higher again. So it was still too close to the water. (把So改为But) 4. 文通理顺查逻辑。“文通”指行文合乎英文词法、句法;“理顺”指行文逻辑符合人们普遍认可的道理。例如: (NMET 2006) The air keeping the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was coming up. (把第二个up改为down) 考点:考查短文改错
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2.A. take            B. climb         C. look          D. roll

3.A. looked          B. burst        C. went           D. found

4.A. met            B. dreamed       C. expected       D. saw

5.A. helping      B. treating     C. watching       D. sitting

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9.A. before        B. for          C. since         D. after

10.A. bring up      B. grow up       C. lift up        D. raise up

11.A. find          B. remove        C. hold          D. cover

12.A. decide         B. remember    C. wonder         D. hope

13.A. passed away   B. put away     C. ran away       D. took away

14.A. after          B. while        C. when          D. before

15.A. body           B. shadow        C. shape          D. figure

16.A. some         B. none        C. all            D. any

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Make sure you give them respect. Now respect isn’t just simply treating her or him nicely. There’s a lot more to it. You have to learn to adjust to their liking. 2. Don’t just think about yourself ; think about what your partner needs out of it as well.

3.Always be willing to help them and give them honesty and positivity at the same time. Make them feel you are someone they can really count on. This is an important step in a relationship.

Make sure you have a good sense of humor with them. Laughter is the key to happiness. Laugh a lot with them, and joke with them. Laughter may seem silly, but it’s the secret to a lot in life. It will keep the sparks alive. 4.

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D.help guard backyards

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A. has to be polite to everyone she meets there

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A. In a cafe.         B. In a restaurant

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