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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改: 在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea between France and England in the balloon in 1784. High over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon. The hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was coming up. The two men threw all their equipments into the water to make the balloon light. It started to rise higher again. So it was still too close to the water.  Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to save themselves. The crowd waiting for to greet them in England were very surprised see this when the balloon landed in front of them.

 

1.the→a 2.discover→discovered 3.keeps→keeping 4.up→down 5.equipments→equipment 6.light→lighter 7.So→But 8.his→their 9.去掉for. 10.surprised后加to 【解析】 试题分析:短文讲述了1784年一个美国人和一个法国人乘气球穿越海洋时突遇气球跑气的情况及他们采取的解决措施。 1.the→a.考查冠词。此处指乘坐一个气球横过海洋,第一次提到用a,故the→a. 2.discover→discovered.考查时态。因为讲述的是1784年发生的事,根据下文时态也知此处要用一般过去时,故discover→discovered. 3.keeps→keeping.考查动词形式。此处是现在分词做定语,指使气球保持上升的空气很快跑没了,故keeps→keeping. 4.up→down.考查副词。因为气球里的空气跑完了气球慢慢下降不是上升,故up→down. 5.equipments→equipment.考查名词。equipment“设备,装备”是不可数名词,没有复数形式,故equipments→equipment. 6.light→lighter.考查形容词比较级。此处指他们扔掉所有的装备目的是使气球变轻,含比较级意思,故light→lighter. 7.So→But.考查连词。此处指气球开始再次上升但还是离水面很近,前后句是转折关系,故So→But. 8.his→their.考查代词。主语是两个人,他们扔掉了他们多数的衣服来救自己。与主语保持一致用复数,故his→their. 9.去掉wait 后的for. 考查动词用法。此处表示“等着做某事”用wait to do sth. 而不是等某人或某物,故去掉wait 后的for. 10.surprised后加to.考查不定式。此处是不定式做状语表示“吃惊地看到”,故surprised后加to. 【名师点睛】 短文改错要注意联系上下文和时态的变化,做题时应以句子为单位,同时兼顾改错的原则。这个原则就是不能改变原意,不能轻易去掉动词、名词等实词,去掉的通常是固定搭配结构中多余的部分。同样,增加的词也是固定搭配中缺少的部分或者是定语从句中的先行词或介词。短文改错中名词的错误多是可数名词和不可数名词的混用;形容词的错误一般是比较级和最高级的混用;副词的错误一般来说是该用副词的地方用成了形容词。 做好短文改错题,可以从以下三方面去考虑: 1.快速阅读短文,如抓住中心思想,从整体上对短文有个了解。不了解全文,很难判断如时态和代词的相关错误。 2.充分运用语言的基础知识,从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发,进行分析判断,尽快找出错误在何处。 3.重视整体和语境,从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组,判断是递进关系还是转折关系,是因果关系还是让步关系。
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