Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr. Manager,

I’m writing to express my thank to you and your employee Miss Li Hong, who helped me found my handbag while I was shopping in your shop in March 24. That day I was greatly interesting and lost myself in enjoying a beautiful product. After I paid a pair of silk socks, I left my handbag on the counter. I have already walked out of the shop then Miss Li came up with my handbag. I thanked her and offered her a reward of 20 dollars and she refused to take even a cent. I deeply moved by her spirit. Miss Li’s good qualities are something I’ll always keep it in mind.

Answer

1.thank 改成thanks

2.found 改成find

3.in March 改成on March

4.interesting 改成interested

5.I paid 后加for

6.I have already 改成I had already[来源:Zxx

7.then Miss Li改成when Miss Li

8.20 dollars and 改成20 dollars but

9.I deeply moved改成I was deeply

10.I’ll always keep it in mind去掉it

【解析】

试题分析：作者写信表达对商店员工李红小姐的感谢。

1.thank 改成thanks 句意：我写信表达对你的感谢。此处thank是名词，用复数形式，故把thank 改成thanks。

2.found 改成find 固定结构：help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事，故把found 改成find。

3.in March 改成on March 在某月用介词in，故把in March 改成on March。

4.interesting 改成interested 句意：我非常感兴趣。be interested in对---感兴趣，故把interesting 改成interested。

5.I paid 后加for 固定词组：pay for为---付款。故在I paid 后加for。

6.I have already 改成I had already句意：我已经走出商店。根据句意可知用过去完成时态，故把I have already 改成I had already。

7.then Miss Li改成when Miss Li 句意：当李小姐想起我的手提包时，我已经走出商店。此处是时间状语从句，故把then Miss Li改成when Miss Li。

8.20 dollars and 改成20 dollars but 句意：我提供20美元的奖赏，但是她拒绝接受。此处表示转折，故把20 dollars and 改成20 dollars but。

9.I deeply moved改成I was deeply 句意：我深深地被打动。此处是被动语态，故把I deeply moved改成I was deeply。

10.

【知识归纳】

表示情感的现在分词和过去分词

surprising令人惊讶的，surprised感到惊讶；frightening令人害怕的， frightened感到害怕； moving令人感动的， moved 感动；exciting 令人兴奋的，excited 感到兴奋；boring令人厌烦的， bored感到厌烦。现在分词的主语通常指事物；过去分词的主语通常指人。比如第7小题，annoying---annoyed 此处表示教授感到烦恼，故把annoying---annoyed。

考点：考查短文改错。