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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

No one lives without a dream. Whether the path is smoothly or tough,we are on the path to achieving it . As a senior 3 student, I have the same dream like my classmates that I can be admitted to an ideal university. In the past three years, I have done everything I can equip myself with that I have learnt from my teachers. Not only have I enjoy the pleasure of study but also I have got closer to my dream. Anxiety and pressure discourage him now and then. Therefore, with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I think I’ll make out it.

I’m sure that there is still a long way to go to achieve my dream. No matter how challenged it is, I’ll make it come true. As the proverb says,Where there has a will, there’s a way.

 

1.smoothly- smooth 2.like-as 3.can后加to 4.that-what 5.enjoyed-enjoy 6.him-me 7.therefore-however 8.去掉out 9.challenged-challenging 10.has-is 【解析】 1.smoothly- smooth考察形容词。系动词后接形容词构成系表结构。文意思通向梦想的道路不管是顺利或者艰难,我们在通往成功的道路上。 2.like-as考察介词。The same as是固定搭配,表示“同样的”,文意是作为一个高三的学生,我与其他的同学一样有着同样的梦想,希望我能进入一所理想的大学。 3.can后加to考察不定式。I can是插入语,可以省略不提,文意是我所做的一切事情都是为了装备我自己。 4.that-what考察引导词。这里what引导宾语从句并充当其宾语,that只起连接作用。文意是我向老师学习来装备我自己。 5.enjoy-enjoyed考察动词。我享受到了学习的乐趣,是I have enjoyed the pleasure of study,当not only放在句首时要使用半倒装结构,即谓语动词的助动词前提。文意是我不进享受到了学习的乐趣,而且距离梦想更近了一步。 6.him-me 考察人称代词。文中人称代词使用错误,文中全文使用的是第一人称。文意是压力正在不时地使我感到泄气。 7.therefore-however考察转折连词。压力正在不时地使我感到泄气,在老师和同学们的鼓励下,我相信我能克服它,两句前后是转折关系,所以用转折连词however。 8.去掉out考察介词。Make out是固定搭配,表示“理解”的意识,用在此处不合适。文意是在老师和同学们的鼓励下,我相信我能克服它。 9.challenged-challenging考察动名词。文意是无论多么困难,我都将实现我的梦想。 10. 考点:短文改错。
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