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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Though great progress has made in science these years, there are still many people living in poor conditions. They make their lives by collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to school because they have not enough money to send their children to there. Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now? The answer lies on the population explosion. A president of a developing country once said; "It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to 'produce' child without limit." Although this few words sound simple enough, they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.

 

1.has made----has been made 2.lives---living 3.thing---things 4.去第二个to 5.you前加do 6.on--in 7.us--we 8.child---children 9.this---these 10.clear---clearly 【解析】 试题分析:本文属于记叙文,现在仍然有很多人生活在贫穷之中,最大的原因在于人口爆炸,地球有限的资源无法满足这么多人的需要。 1.has made----has been made 考查语态。根据动词短语make progress取得进步,可知本句主语progress与动词make构成被动关系,所以使用被动语态has been made。 2.lives---living 考查固定短语。短语make one's living谋生;句意:他们通过收集出售二手商品谋生; 3.thing---things 考查名词复数形式。名词“thing事物”是可数名词,本句中“二手商品”指一类事物,所以使用复数形式“things”。 4.去第二个to 考查副词。副词there在句中单独做状语,前面不需要加介词。 5.you前加do 考查句子结构。本句是一个特殊疑问句,在特殊疑问词的后面接一般疑问句,而一般疑问句要把助动词,系动词或情态动词提前至主语之前。 6.on--in 考查动词短语。动词短语lie in在于....;因为;句意:为什么你会认为如此多的人仍然还很贫穷?答案在于人口爆炸。 7.us--we 考查代词。本句是一个强调句型,强调的是句子的主语we。句意:应该受到批评的是我们,因为我们过去没有节制地生了很多孩子。 8.child---children 考查可数名词复数形式。本句中名词child孩子是一个可数名词,因为人们生的孩子很多,应该使用复数形式children。 9.this---these 考查上下文。前句“It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to 'produce' child without limit.”说了多个内容,所以使用these words指代。 10. 【名师点睛】 在完成 一、查时态是否一致 时态错误几乎是每年NMET短文改错中必设的改错题。要有目的地去检查文中的每一 个谓语动词的时态与上下文、语境以及该句的时间状语是否相符和一致。 例如:Today, it is much easier to be healthy than it is in the past.(NMET' 93)is应改为was, 使之与时间状语n the past一致。 二、查主谓是否一致 在检查谓语动词的时态和语态是否正确的同时, 还要注意检查该动词在人称和数上是否 与主语保持了一致。例如: 1.Anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing to borrow them.(NMET' 94) cost应改为costs,因其主语是it(为形式主语),且上下文均为一般现在时。 2.The new boy or girl in school quickly become one of the class„(NMET'93) 由or 连接的两个以上的主语应由靠近谓语的主语来决定谓语的单复数形式,故become应改为becomes。 主谓语一致的情况较为复杂,考生平时学习要留心归纳。有些特殊句式的主谓一致问题 很容易被忽视,如倒装句、关系代词在定语从句中做主语的情况等,答题时要高度重视。 三、查指代是否一致 对于短文中出现的每一个代词都要查一下它所指代的内容以及在句中的作用,注意其 数、格、词性是否正确和前后一致,包括人称代词、指标代词、反身代词、关系代词以及疑 问代词等。指代错误也是高考改错题中常设的改错题。例如: 1.We climb everywhere, not only in America. They have been to Europe„ (NMET'92) 根据上下文,句中的They属指代不一致,应改为We。 2.The game speaks for themselves.(MET'90) 句中的反身代词themselves 应改为单数itself,因为指代的是单数主语the game。 四、查平行结构是否平行一致 由and,or,but,either„or„,neither„nor„,not only „but also„,as well as等并列连词和词组连接的结构可称为平行结构。平行结构在词性、时态、非谓语动词的形式上往往要求前后一致。答题时要留心平行结构前后是否对等平行,这也是常设的错误。 例如:Modern people know„,have better food, and to live in cleaner surroundings.(NMET'93) 应将to live前的to删掉,因为and连接的是know,have .live 三个并列平行的谓语动词,其时态和形式必须一致。 五、查名词的单复数与修饰词语或上下文是否一致 名词数的错误也是高考常设的改错题。要查一下名词是否可数,与其修饰语是否一致。 例如: 1.„They have been to Europe many time.(NMET'92) time(次)显然与修饰语many不一致,应改为times。 2.(They)„ asked me lots of question.(NMET'96) question是可数名词,其修饰词是 lots of,当然应该用复数questions。 六、查行文逻辑是否一致 查这方面的错误应从文章整体内容出发,通篇考虑, 以行为单位是难以发现这种错误的。 逻辑不一致主要是由肯定与否定、关联词语以及动词(如come与go,take与bring)的误用所造成的,应多从这方面去查找。 考点:考查短文改错
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