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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

A survey basing on 1,000 students found that half of the pupils and 80% of the middle school students sleeps less than nine hours every night. Too many homework given by school teachers and parents is the main reasons. Another reason lies in students’ bad habits. Some students, for example, are absent-minded while doing his homework, and some waste their after-class time. The third reason is because some students have to get up early on weekdays to get school far away from home. Experts are calling at schools and parents to cut down on the amount of homework but students should make a good use of their time. It would be better if they could choose to study in a nearby school.

 

1.basing---based 2.sleeps----sleep 3.many-----much 4.reasons-----reason 5.his-----their 6.because------that 7.get后加to 8.at---on 9.and---but 10.去掉make后的a 【解析】 试题分析: 本文讲述的是中小学生存在的严重睡眠不足的问题,并建议学生应该就近入学。 1.basing---based 考查非谓语动词。根据survey是base的动作承受者,应用过去分词作定语。故basing---based。 2.2】sleeps----sleep 考查动词。根据该句的主语half of the pupils and 80% of the middle school students判断不应用单三形式,故sleeps----sleep。 3.3】many-----much 考查形容词。根据该句的homework是不可数名词,应用much修饰,故many-----much。 4.4】reasons-----reason 考查名词。根据此句的主语homework判断reason应用单数形式。故reasons-----reason。 5.5】his-----their 考查代词。根据前文的students此处形容词性物主代词应用their。故his-----their。 6.6】because------that 考查连词。根据reason做主语,表语从句应用that引导,故because------that 。 7.7】get后加to 考查介词。根据词组get to到达。故get后加to。 8.8】at---on 考查介词。根据词组call on sb to do sth号召某人做某事。故at---on。 9.9】and---but 考查连词。根据前后分句之间的转折关系。故and---but。 10.0】去掉make后的a 考查冠词。根据词组make good use of充分利用。故去掉make后的a。 【名师点睛】 关于改错题的建议 1.名词和限制词的搭配 主要涉及可数与不可数名词与冠词、指示代词、物主代词的错误搭配,以及名词的单复数的误用。如11.4】reasons-----reason 考查名词。根据此句的主语homework判断reason应用单数形式。故reasons-----reason。 2.动词的时态、语态以及非谓语动词 常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时中间杂有另一时态的现象,以及动词的谓语与非谓语形式、非谓语动词之间的误用。如. 12.2】sleeps----sleep 考查动词。根据该句的主语half of the pupils and 80% of the middle school students判断不应用单三形式,故sleeps----sleep。 3.代词的误用 主要是代词的格与数的错用。如男性用了女性代词,单数用了复数代词或相反;应当用形容词性的物主代词用了名词性等。如:13.5】his-----their 考查代词。根据前文的students此处形容词性物主代词应用their。故his-----their。 4.数词的误用 主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用,以及hundred, thousand, dozen, score等词和具体数量词连用时的用法以及表示约数的用法。 5.形容词与副词 主要涉及到形容词和副词的原级、比较级与最高级的误用,以及形容词和副词的误用以及名词和形容词的混用等。如14.3】many-----much 考查形容词。根据该句的homework是不可数名词,应用much修饰,故many-----much。 6.考查英语中的并列现象 在一些英语中的并列结构中没有用并列的语法结构,如并列连词连接的两个部分等。 7.考查上下文的逻辑关系 but, and, so,however, otherwise等一些并列连词和连接副词的误用。before, after, when, until, since等状语从句引导词的误用等。还有肯定和否定的误用等。 8.一些相似结构的误用 如used to do, be used to do, be used to doing等结构的误用。 9.惯用法的搭配 改错步骤 上述9个方面,同学们在做题时只要稍加留意,找出错误的比率就会增大很多。做短文改错题时一般遵循以下几个步骤: 1.先通读全文。认真阅读短文,在做题之前确保已经弄清原文大意。注意文章中上下文的逻辑关系是否正确,时态、人称、主谓、指代等是否一致。 2.聚焦出题热点、综合运用所学语言知识,分句(注意以句子为单位而不是以行为单位)对不同的错误情况进行分析和回答(即改词、加词或减词)。 3.再次通读全文,校对自己的改正是否正确。一般各种改错的方式都应该用到,如果出现了某一种改法(如加词、减词等)没有用到,要考虑自己的改错应该有问题,要对刚才不是很有把握的行进行推敲。在自己认为正确的行后划勾,并且校对其他行改正的符号是否准确,大小写是否拼写正确(这点同学们很容易忽视)。如果某一行有两种改错方式要推敲哪一种是最佳改法。 考点:考查固定搭配以及语法
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