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书面表达 假如你是李丽,正在家乡的一所普通高中就读。最近你的叔叔给你来信,建议你...

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假如你是李丽,正在家乡的一所普通高中就读。最近你的叔叔给你来信,建议你到他所在城市的一所重点学校读书,并列举了那里的优势:环境优美,名师众多,教学设施先进,升学率高。请你写一封100词左右的回信表示感谢并说明拒绝去那里读书的理由。

注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

2.文章的开头和结尾已给出。

Dear Uncle,

I'm very glad to receive your letter and thank you very much for your loving care.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

LiLi

 

Dear uncle, I’m very glad to receive your letter and thank you very much for your loving care. Maybe it would be beneficial to me if I studied at a key school in your city, But considering my personal things, I prefer to study at my present school, Although our school is located in the country side, its environment is very beautiful. Now, I’m getting or well with all my teacher s, who teach well and are very responsible. I think whether a student studies well depends on the student himself or herself, not on the teachers. what’s more, in recent years our school has also been equipped with some modern teaching facilities ,which make our classes more interesting and lively, of course, if I went to your city to study, I might have more chances to go to university. However, I might also experience more stress, which would be harmful to my study. Best wishes Yours sincerely, LiLi 【解析】 试题分析:本次作文要求根据假如你是李丽,正在家乡的一所普通高中就读。最近叔叔来信,建议你到他所在城市的一所重点学校读书,并列举了那里的优势:环境优美,名师众多,教学设施先进,升学率高。写一封100词左右的回信表示感谢并说明拒绝去那里读书的理由。要点包括:首先表示感谢;写明情况解释原因;表达祝愿。 故既要完成任务,又要兼顾形式的要求。 写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:定语从句who teach well and are very responsible.which make our classes more interesting and lively.和 which would be harmful to my study.主语从句whether a student studies well.非谓语动词considering my personal things。句型it would be beneficial to me if…located, equipped with等词汇及what’s more, However等连接词。 考点:应用文写作。 【名师点睛】 应用文写作指导 应用文写作是高考书面表达常考的一种形式,题目的设计形式多种多样,一般通过图画、表格、提纲等形式展示表达的话题及相关信息和主要内容,一般都要有一定的汉语提示和要求。写作内容大都包括对信息内容的客观描述,还要发表自己的观点和看法;有时要求提出解决问题的办法或建议。 应用文的写作要注意以下几个方面: 1、写作的前提是明确目的,以便合理的安排文章内容和结构。除了感谢信、道歉信、邀请信、推荐信、投诉信、求职信等目的较明确外,发言稿、通知、调查报告等也要考虑写作文章的用途或听众与读者的需求; 2、写作的关键是仔细审题,通过审题,得出图画、图表或提纲提示信息,并选准表达要点,使其很好的描述现象,分析问题,解决问题,达到写作的目的; 3、注意篇章结构的整体安排:开篇点题,表明写作的目的(一般给出);描述事物的顺序和思路(按照审题得出的表达要点合理安排,要符合客观实际和人们的认知规律);合适自然的结尾(首尾呼应,提出解决问题的方法或建议)。 4、注意应用文的语言要规范、准确,要得体;选词要丰富,适量使用结构稍复杂的长短句式,如倒装句、强调句和定语从句等,确保写作信息的含量;注意过度与衔接,确保行文连贯,提高写作的质量。 5、选择恰当的人称和时态:以第一、三人称为主,主要选用现在时态。  
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2.A. even         B. still           C. too                 D. just

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4.A. Generally  B. Unluckily       C. Actually            D. Naturally

5.A. beat        B. change           C. test                D. frighten

6.A. laugh       B. cry             C. play                D. smile

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10.A. live       B. focus           C. depend            D. base

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12.A. legs       B. feet            C. teeth               D. wings

13.A. received    B. accepted        C. noticed             D. covered

14.A. try         B. begin           C. appreciate          D. enjoy

15.A. suggests    B. insists         C. reminds             D. orders

16.A. forget     B. start           C. stand               D. achieve

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1.What does the underlined word "obesity" in the last paragraph probably mean?

A. Violence.      B. Sadness.

C. Famine.      D. Overweight.

2.We can infer from the passage that       _.

A. a typical menu from a US school consists of enough nutrition

B. most students in South Africa eat their lunch at home

C. many schools in Australia have traffic lights outside their school

D. you can have whatever you like in school canteens in Japan

3.What is the main idea of the passage?

A. Schools should try to satisfy the needs of students.

B. Schools serve different foods from country to country.

C. Food served in America is the best of all.

D. School children all over the world dislike their school food.

4.The article is meant for         .

A. school lunch suppliers      B. schoolmasters

C. students of your age      D. nutritionists

 

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