Question

短文改错

读下面的短文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

One cold winter day in 1900, a small boy was called Charles Chaplin was walked along the street in London. He doesn’t have breakfast or lunch. He wanted to buy some bread, and he didn’t have any money. His father died since he was very young. His mother was often very sick, so she could take care of Charles or his brother. All of them had to work to help his mother. He was very young but his dream was very big. He wanted to be great man in the world of films. So he worked very hardly.

Answer

1.was called 删除was /who ,that

2.walked – walking

3.doesn’t – didn’t

4.and he – but he

5.since – when

6.could – could not

7.All – Both

8.his mother – their mother

9.be great – be a great

10.hardly – hard

【解析】

试题分析：介绍了卓别林从小便要自力更生，立志成为世界电影史上伟大的人物的故事。

1.was called 删除，考查，后半句是一个完整的句子，故此处多了be动词和谓语。句意：1900年的一个寒冷的冬日，一个名叫卓别林查尔斯的小男孩在伦敦的街上走着。故was called 删除

2.walked – walking考查动词，此处是过去进行时，动词用ing形式。句意：1900年的一个寒冷的冬日，一个名叫卓别林查尔斯的小男孩在伦敦的街上走着。故walked – walking

3.doesn’t – didn’t考查助动词。此处是过去完成时，动词用过去完成式。句意：他没有吃早餐或午餐。故doesn’t – didn’t

4.and he – but he考查连词。此处表示转折关系，而不是并列关系，用转折连词。句意：他想买一些面包，但是他没有钱。故and he – but he

5.since – when考查引导词。后面是一个完整的从句，故引导词用when。句意：他爸爸在他很年轻的时候就过世了。故since – when

6.could – could not考查语境理解。前半句说他妈妈经常生病，所以她应该是不能照顾查尔斯和他的兄弟，故此处应是否定形式。故could – could not

7.All – Both 考查介词。前一句的brother是单数形式，表示他只有一个兄弟，故此处表示是他们两个，用Both，All用于两者以上。句意：他们两个都需要工作帮助他们的妈妈。故All – Both

8.his mother – their mother考查代词。此处表达的是他和他的兄弟的妈妈，所以代词用复数形式。句意：他们两个都需要工作帮助他们的妈妈。故his mother – their mother

9.be great – be a great考查冠词。great man是可数名词，表示一类人，是泛指，故加不定冠词。句意：他想要成为世界电影上一个伟大的人。故be great – be a great

10.考查形容词。此处用于修饰名词he，故用形容词。句意：所以他非常努力工作。故hardly – hard

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