Question

书面表达

假设你是李华，你所在的城市广州将于2016年春节期间举办外国人才艺大赛（talent show），请给你的外教Lucy 写一封email, 希望她能参赛，主要内容如下：

1. 比赛地点：广州歌剧院 ( the Guangzhou Opera House )

2. 报名方式：网上报名

3. 根据你对她才艺了解，动员她参赛

4. 凡参加者都有意外惊喜

报名：sign up

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；

3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Lucy,

I’m looking forward to seeing your wonderful performance.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Lucy,

How are you? I have a good piece of news which might interest you. A talent show which is intended for foreigners will be held in Guangzhou at 2016 Spring Festival. Would you like to participate?

As far as I know, you are a very talented person. Actually, anyone who knows you well is fully aware of your gift in B-box, which makes me believe that if you participate in the show, you will impress all the audience. So why not give it a try?

The show will be held at the Guangzhou Opera House. All the participants are supposed to sign up online. By the way, whoever takes part in the show will be given a nice gift. Sounds great, right?

I’m looking forward to seeing your wonderful performance.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假设你是李华，你所在的城市广州将于2016年春节期间举办外国人才艺大赛（talent show），请给你的外教Lucy 写一封email, 希望她能参赛，主要内容如下：1. 比赛地点：广州歌剧院 ( the Guangzhou Opera House )2. 报名方式：网上报名3. 根据你对她才艺了解，动员她参赛

4. 凡参加者都有意外惊喜。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。

【亮点说明】

I have a good piece of news which might interest you运用定语从句；A talent show which is intended for foreigners will be held in Guangzhou at 2016 Spring Festival.限制性定语从句和一般将来时态的被动语态完美结合；As far as I know, you are a very talented person.固定句式在句中体现；Actually, anyone who knows you well is fully aware of your gift in B-box, which makes me believe that if you participate in the show, you will impress all the audience.本句将限制性定语从句、非限制性定语从句、宾语从句和条件状语从句有机结合在一句中；By the way, whoever takes part in the show will be given a nice gift.主语从句用在句中出现。

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