Question

读后续写

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

One day, my brother and I were alone in our apartment. The reason was that my parents had both gone for a ball party and had left me in charge of everything. I was doing my homework while my younger brother was watching television. Suddenly, the doorbell rang. Ding-Dong! Ding-Dong! My younger brother had rushed to the door before I decided to answer the door. We both thought that our parents had come home. As a result, he unlocked the door and opened it.

Outside of the house stood a man who wore a black raincoat and black rubber boots. He looked no different from other people and he said that he was a salesman and asked politely if our mother or father was at home so he could talk with them.

Without any thinking, my brother said, “No.” He asked if we would like to buy some comic books, which he was selling. I quickly explained to him that we were not supposed to buy anything without our parents’ permission. However, it seemed that he was not willing to follow my advice and he had an intention to enter our house.

Then I realized something terrible would happen. As I was about to close the door, he forced his way into our house. He took out a knife and forced me to tie up my brother’s hands with some rope which he took out from his pocket. I tied up his hands but I tied in a special way so my brother could untie himself as we often did. The man then tied my hands up and locked both of us in the kitchen.

Soon he went upstairs to search the bedroom for something valuable. I managed to teach my brother to untie the rope on his hands. He then untied me. I rushed to the telephone to call the police, but the line was dead.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

The doors were all locked from the outside and what’s worse, I did not have the keys. __________________________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph 2:

Just at the same time our parents came back home. ________________________________

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Answer

The doors were all locked from the outside and what’s worse, I did not have the keys. But luckily, the man forgot to lock the kitchen window. Both my brother and I managed to get out of the house through the window and we ran to the nearby police station and asked them for help. The police arrived at our house as soon as quickly. And as a result, the man was caught.

Just at the same time our parents came back home. The police asked my family to go to the police station. It was there the police told us that the man was a wanted robber pretending to sell comic books and they have been trying to catch him for a long time. The police praised my brother and me for our bravery. After we went back home, I told my parents the whole story about the robbery. They were thankful that we were not hurt but they scolded me for not stopping my brother from opening the door to strangers. I learned a lesson on safety and responsibility. (154 words)

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于浙江高考的新题型：续写。对考生的思维能力和谋篇布局的要求非常高，首先考生要充分理解原文内容：父母外出，我和弟弟在家。贼人进入家里抢劫财物。阅读时一定要注意文章中留下的线索词，并展开合理想象。文章要适应第一人称和一般过去时的时态。要点：1.我们从厨房逃走并报警；2.警察抓住贼人。3.父母亲到家以后到警察局做笔录，警察表扬我们勇敢机智。整篇范文结构合理，内容贴切，符合生活常识。在写作的时候，考生运用了较多的高级句式和高级词汇，体现出很强的驾驭语言的能力。

考点：考查续写