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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Even today, a man with good manner will politely open the door for a lady, help her put on her coat when necessary and see her safely to the door of her home before a date. When a man take a woman out for a dinner, it is considered impolite to help her with her chair when she gets up or sits down. On a crowding train or bus, it is proper for a man offer a woman his seat, particular if she is old or carries a baby. Even when it comes to shake hands, ladies come first. It is impolite for a man to extend his hand for a handshake upon first greeting. Unless a woman does not extend her hand to the man first, the man shouldn’t offer theirs.

 

1.manner---manners 2.before ---after 3.a dinner---dinner 4.impolite----polite 5.crowding---crowded 6.offer---to offer 7.particular---particularly 8.shake---shaking 9.Unless---if 10.theirs---his 【解析】 1.manner---manners 考查名词的单复数。此处指的是方式,礼貌,应该用复数表明这个男士具有很多礼仪。故填manner---manners。 2.before ---after 考查连词。此处指的是在约会后将女士送回家。故before ---after。 3.a dinner---dinner 考查冠词。 out for dinner表示出去吃晚餐,不需要加冠词。故a dinner---dinner。 4.impolite----polite 考查句意理解。句意:当她起床或坐下来时,帮她把椅子扶起来是有礼貌的。故impolite----polite。 5.crowding---crowded 考查非谓语动词。此处过去分词形式表示一种状态,表示车厢非常拥挤。故crowding---crowded。 6.offer---to offer 考查固定用法。此处表示目的,表示一位男士给女生让座。故offer---to offer。 7.particular---particularly 考查词性。particularly表示特别尤其,放在句首,表示强调。故particular---particularly。 8.shake---shaking 考查动词。come to 后接名词、数词、代词表示谈到, 涉及到;故shake---shaking。 9.Unless---if 考查连词。句意:如果一个女人不向男人伸出手来,男人不应该为她们提供他的。故Unless---if。 10.theirs---his 考查句意理解。根据前文的the man,可知此处是单数,故theirs---his。 考点:考查短文改错 【名师点睛】 在短文改错中常出现的错误主要有以下几类: 1. 名词单复数用错,可数与不可数名词的混用。比如第1句考查名词的单复数。此处指的是方式,礼貌,应该用复数表明这个男士具有很多礼仪。故填manner---manners。 2. 动词:时态和语态,常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时,中间杂有不适的另一时态的现象;或是及物动词后无宾语,或是不及物动词后加了宾语;需要接ing形式的接了to,或相反等。 3. 形容词副词:常出现需形容词的地方用了副词或相反;关系副词where, when, why等的缺失或错用。 4. 介词:主要是介词的多余或缺失,错用。 5. 主谓一致性:第三人称单数漏掉s,或主语为复数,谓语动词用了单数;再就是就近原则对主语的影响。 6. 冠词:定冠词the的多余或缺失,如季节,月份,星期,球类及三餐活动,称呼头衔前等不能加the的地方加了the。比如第3题:考查冠词。 out for dinner表示出去吃晚餐,不需要加冠词。故a dinner---dinner。 7. 数词:主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用。 8. 连词:不合句中的逻辑关系。如需转折连词(如but)的时候用了承接连词(so),或相反等等。比如第9句考查连词。句意:如果一个女人不向男人伸出手来,男人不应该为她们提供他的。故Unless---if。 9. 代词:主要是代词的格与数的错用。如男性用了女性代词,单数用了复数代词或相反;应当用形容词性的物主代词用了宾格,主格或相反,关系代词的错用或缺失。比如第10题:考查句意理解。根据前文的the man,可知此处是单数,故theirs---his。 10. 常用固定短语或固定用法及句型用错。比如第6题:考查固定用法。此处表示目的,表示一位男士给女生让座。故offer---to offer。
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