Question

假如你是李华，你的笔友Mike从电视上得知前段时间北京多个地方出现雾霾(haze),非常担心，写E-mail询问有关情况，请回复。 1.实况描述;  2.对生活造成的影响  3.成因简析与教训;  4.你个人的情况。

要求：1.词数100-120;

2.email的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。,

Dear Mike,

Thank you very much for your concern.

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Yours,Li Hua

Answer

Dear Mike,

Thank you very much for your concern. Last months several places in Beijing were blanketed with thick yellow fog. Everything around disappeared from our sight. Some highways were closed. Traffic jams were commonly seen in the streets.

Many people, especially children and seniors, even found it difficult to breathe. As a result, local hospitals were crowded with people who had problems with their noses and lungs. Part of the cause was the dry weather, but the severely damaged environment contributed a lot to this nightmare. Personally I didn’t get any health problems in the haze because I stayed mostly indoors. But to make a significant change, we really have to do more to protect our environment.

To live a better life we have to push on with the economy, but it wound be meaningless if we have to achieve it at the cost of our breathing air.

Yours， Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。除了表达这些要点以外，还要给出自己的建议，这就要求考生自己拓展发挥，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语As a result结果；be crowded with充满。。；live a ..life 过着。。的生活；at the cost of以。。为代价；Many people, especially children and seniors, even found it difficult to breathe这个句子it做形式宾语，真正的宾语是后面的不定式；As a result, local hospitals were crowded with people who had problems with their noses and lungs.这个句子运用到who引导的定语从句；But to make a significant change, we really have to do more to protect our environment.这个句子不定式做目的状语；

考点： 提纲类作文