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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear that you are considering make up with Peter. If I am you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.

As far as I know it, Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercises by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpfully in rebuilding your friendship. Beside, taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport. Its convenient him to get around as well.

Apart from giving him the gift, you can also adopt other means, such as traveling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter how you do, being sincere was the most important. I really hope that you can be good friends forever.

Best wishes!

Li Hua

 

1.make---making 2.am---were 3.exercises---exercise 4.helpfully---helpful 5.Beside--- Besides 6.the---a 7.how---what 8.was---is 【解析】 1.make---making 考查固定用法。be considering doing 正在考虑做某事。故make---making。 2.am---were 考查时态。根据句意可知这里为虚拟语气,此处应该用过去时。故am---were。 3.exercises---exercise 考查名词的单复数。此处表示锻炼,无复数形式。故exercises---exercise。 4.helpfully---helpful 考查形容词。Be+adj构成系表结构。故helpfully---helpful。 5.Beside--- Besides 考查连词。Besides表示除此之外,故Beside--- Besides。 6.the---a 考查冠词。此处不表示特指,表示一个。故the---a。 7.how---what 考查连词。No matter what you do:无论你干什么。故how---what。 8.was---is 考查时态。根据前后文可知此处时态为一般现在时。故was---is。 考点:考查短文改错 【名师点睛】 在短文改错中常出现的错误主要有以下几类: 1. 名词单复数用错,可数与不可数名词的混用。比如第3题:考查名词的单复数。此处表示锻炼,无复数形式。故exercises---exercise。 2. 动词:时态和语态,常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时,中间杂有不适的另一时态的现象;或是及物动词后无宾语,或是不及物动词后加了宾语;需要接ing形式的接了to,或相反等。比如第8题:考查时态。根据前后文可知此处时态为一般现在时。故was---is。 3. 形容词副词:常出现需形容词的地方用了副词或相反;关系副词where, when, why等的缺失或错用。 4. 介词:主要是介词的多余或缺失,错用。比如最后一句It is said that three so little cars can fit in with the space now needed for one car of the usual size. fit in适应,适合;装配好;找时间做,故把fit in with---去掉with。 5. 主谓一致性:第三人称单数漏掉s,或主语为复数,谓语动词用了单数;再就是就近原则对主语的影响。 6. 冠词:定冠词the的多余或缺失,如季节,月份,星期,球类及三餐活动,称呼头衔前等不能加the的地方加了the。 7. 数词:主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用。 8. 连词:不合句中的逻辑关系。如需转折连词(如but)的时候用了承接连词(so),或相反等等。比如第5题: 考查连词。Besides表示除此之外,故Beside--- Besides。 9. 代词:主要是代词的格与数的错用。如男性用了女性代词,单数用了复数代词或相反;应当用形容词性的物主代词用了宾格,主格或相反,关系代词的错用或缺失。 10. 常用固定短语或固定用法及句型用错。比如第1题: 考查固定用法。be considering doing 正在考虑做某事。故make---making。
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