Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

For students learned instruments, summer is always a “music season”. During vacation time, we are always busy attending various of lessons, taking exams and participating in competitions. This summer I joined in a music competition but was lucky to get the second place. It was the first time that I have played on the stage. In front of the stage was my excited schoolmates. Facing such many people. I felt very upset at first, but the encourage from my teacher kept me going ahead.

Fortunate, I was given a silver medal, that increased my confidence. In short, nothing is impossible to willing heart.

Answer

1.learned → learning

2.various后面的of去掉

3.but → and

4.have → had

5.was → were

6.such → so

7.encourage → encouragement

8.Fortunate→ Fortunately

9.that → which

10.to 后加a

【解析】

试题分析：通过本文可知“心头有志愿，无事不可能”。

1.learned → learning 与逻辑主语students是主动关系，故用现在分词作状语。故把learned改为learning。

2.various后面的of去掉 various是形容词，后面直接跟名词，故去掉of。

3.but → and 句意：今年夏天我参加了一个音乐比赛，并且很幸运得了第二。此处表示并列顺承关系，不是转折关系，故把but改为and。

4.have → had 考查固定句式。根据主句中用was可知，后面的从句用过去完成时态，故把have改为had。

5.was → were 此句是全部倒装，主语是my excited schoolmates，复数形式，故把was改为were。

6.such → so 名词前面有many，故把such改为so。

7.encourage → encouragement 句意：来自老师的鼓励让我一直前进。名词作主语，故把encourage改为encouragement。

8.Fortunate → Fortunately 副词修饰整个句子，故把Fortunate改为Fortunately。

9.that → which 此处是整个句子作先行词，后面是非限制性定语从句，that不能引导非限制性定语从句，故把that改为which。

10.to 后加a 句意：心头有志愿，无事不可能。即心坚石穿。heart是可数名词，故表示泛指一颗心时，前面要加a。

【知识归纳】

1. 以e结尾的形容词变成副词时，有的直接加ly ;有的把e去掉再加ly.

possible---possibly； simple---simply; gentle---gently; terrible---terribly; true---truly; flexible---flexibly

immediate--- immediately; brave---bravely; wise---wisely；active---actively；fortunate →fortunately

2. so和such的区分

so （adv.）表示“如此”、“这样”的意思.用作副词,修饰形容词和副词.主要结构有：

（1）so +adj.+a/an +可数名词单数+that从句

（2）so+adj./adv.+that从句

（3）so+many/few/much/little+复数可数名词+that从句

such（adj.）表示“如此”“这样”的意思.用作形容词,修饰名词.主要结构有：

（1）such+a/an+adj.+单数可数名词+that从句

（2）such+adj.+不可数名词+that从句

（3）such+adj.+复数可数名词+that从句

考点：考查语篇理解和词汇、语法知识