Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下面一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

During this summer holiday, my parent and I climbed Mount Huang. The weather was such fine that the three of us could enjoy the sunrise. At 4:00 the next morning we were already on a top. While waited for the sunrise, we were all excited. First a bit of pale light appeared the east. Suddenly, the sun came out, was looking like a large ball, but the sky became red. Late on, the sunlight became so strong that we couldn't look at it directly. In the afternoon, they said goodbye to Mount Huang, that made a good impression on me.

Answer

1.parent→parents

2.such→so

3.top前的a→the

4.waited→waiting

5.the前面加in

6.looking前面的was去掉

7.but→and

8.Late→Later

9.they→we

10.that→which

【解析】

试题分析：通过修改作文方式的短文，考查学生对固定搭配，动词时态和语态，名词的单复数问题等。

1.应该用复数形式，表示父母亲，故需改为parents。

2.这里修饰形容词，故要用so，构成so...that...句型，such修饰名词，故需将such改为so。

3.top前的a→the 考查冠词。on the top为固定短语，表示“在顶部”。

4.

5. 考查介词。in the east表示“在东方”，为固定搭配，所以需在the前加in。

6.looking前面的was去掉 考查非谓语动词。这里looking like是与came out并列的动词，所以需去掉was。

7.连词。“太阳像一个大的球”与“天空变红了”是并列结构，but表示转折关系，所以这里需改为and，表示并列关系。

8.意为“后来”，为固定短语。

9.考查人称代词。文章以第一人称讲述，所以需将they改为we。

10.that不能引导非限制性定语从句，先行词是Mount Huang，故这里需改为which。

考点：语篇理解以及语法知识。