Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I'd like to talking about my most memorable experience. It was a trip to Australia I had three years before with my dance group to participate in international dance festival. It was the first time I had travelled by plane in my life. My mum worried a lot, so everything went smoothly. I stayed there for two week and it was the happiest time in my life. Besides our performances there, we have much excitement. We spent on almost every morning sunbathing on the beautiful beach and swam in the blue sea. But warmly Australian nights were which I adored most of all. It was a time of joy，light，music and summer parties.

Answer

1.talking→talk

2.before→ago

3.在international前加an

4.so→but

5.week→weeks

6.have→had

7.去掉on

8.swam→swimming

9.warmly→warm

10.which→what

【解析】

试题分析：作者谈论澳大利亚的一次难忘的旅行。

1.talking→talk 固定结构：would like to do sth.，故把talking改为talk。

2.→ago 表示“三年前”，before应该放在three years前面，但现在在后面，故把before改为ago。

3.表示“参加一个国际舞蹈节”。International以元音音素开头，故在international前加an。

4.so→but 前句是worried，后句是smoothly，可知前后是转折关系，故把so改为but。

5.week→weeks 前面有two修饰，故后面名词要用复数形式，故把week改为weeks。

6.have→had 纵观全文，可知用一般过去时态，故把have--- had。

7. spend是及物动词，后面可直接接宾语，故去掉on。

8.swam→swimming 固定结构：spend...（in） doing sth.，swam和前面的sunbathing是并列关系，故把swam改为swimming。

9.warmly→warm 形容词修饰名词，故把warmly改为warm。

10.→what 句意：但是温暖的澳大利亚夜晚正是我最崇拜的。此处是what引导的表语从句，即起引导作用又在从句中作一个宾语，此处不表示范围，故把which改为what。

【知识归纳】

介词后面用动名词做宾语He left home without telling his parents.他没告诉他的父母就离开了家。

温馨提示：be busy with sth.忙于某事/be busy doing sth.忙于做某事；spend---on sth. 在某事上花费---/spend---(in) doing sth.在做某事上花费---；have difficulty(trouble/problems) with sth.在某事上有困难/ have difficulty(trouble/problems) (in) doing sth.在做某事上有困难。

考点：考查语篇理解和词汇、语法知识