假定英语课上老师要求同桌交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有十处语言错误， 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加， 删除， 或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意： 每处错误及修改均仅限一次;只允许修改10处， 多者从第11处起不计分。
Dear Alice,
I was delighted to receive your letter. Thank you on the English dictionary you bought it for me. I received it this morning. There is no doubt which it is of great help to me. I’m deep grateful for your advice that I should pay more attentions to practicing my spoken English. I’ve made up my mind to speak English both in and out of class. Next month I’ll take trip to Australia, which is organizing by my school. I hope I can practiced my spoken English there as much as possible. By the way, I am sending you a set of stamps with this letter, but I’ll send you more if I got any. I do hope you will have a good holiday.
Yours,
Jack
Writing text messages while walking is dangerous. A study says it is more dangerous than texting while driving. Researchers found that there are more 1. (injury) to texting pedestrians(行人) than there are to texting motorists. Their report says walking is not as easy 2. we think. We must focus on many things at the same time to walk safely in a straight line. The researchers said that people forget how to walk 3.(proper), so dangerous things happen to them. They bump(撞) into walls and other people. They walk into cars, fall over things in the street, 4. even fall into holes.
A professor said walking is a difficult action. There are several reasons 5. texting makes walking dangerous. 6. is that people cannot see the street. Another is that they focus on their phone keyboard instead of their feet. A final reason is that their minds are somewhere else—they are not thinking about 7. (walk) from A to B safely. The professor said over 6,000 people 8. (visit) his hospital last year because of texting. He said 9. worst cases are head injuries. When a pedestrian is tossed into the air he/she has nothing 10. (protect) the head. The damage can be serious.
A few years after Mom died, Dad handed me a plastic bag. That evening, I ________ the bag to find dozens of shells, each one ________ in white tissue paper（纸巾）and having Mom’s handwriting.
The shells were pretty ________, but to Mom, they were evidence of her endlessly magical life and ________ me of the seashore trip with her. She was 61 when she ________ these shells, and already showing ________ of the lung disease. We knew something was ________ and Mom needed an adventure. She suggested a dinner and a movie. But two friends and I had bigger ________.
Mom had been to the ocean only twice, but she ________ the seashore. Her kitchen was decorated（装饰） with souvenirs from those two trips. I told Mom that we would ________ for Jersey Shore. Mom was so ________ that she screamed and Amber, her dog was ________ to jump onto the floor.
One of my favorite ________ on the road was a discussion about movies. Mom often got the titles wrong. “Ohhhh,” she said, “what was that movie about a teacher at the boys’ school?” Before anyone could ________, she shouted, “The Dead Man’s Poet!” I looked back and saw a back seat full of ________. “Mom,” I said. “You mean Dead poets Society?” “That’s it!” Mom yelled. ________ filled the car.
Once we got to Stone Harbor, she began to ________ the trip, greeting strangers and spending hours gathering shells. The morning we left, I found her photographing every inch of her bedroom. “I don’t ever want to ________ this,” she said.
For a long time, Mom’s shells stayed ________ in a drawer. Last month, I ________ them again while searching for something else. I put them in a visible place as a reminder from a mother who never lost her sense of wonder.
1.A. receivedB. openedC. checkedD. packed
2.A. foldedB. includedC. trappedD. covered
3.A. hardB. commonC. heavyD. big
4.A. remindedB. requiredC. informedD. warned
5.A. movedB. boughtC. collectedD. found
6.A. causesB. riskC. signsD. record
7.A. wrongB. missingC. strangeD. boring
8.A. tasksB. changesC. dreamsD. plans
9.A. understoodB. trustedC. lovedD. respected
10.A. waitB. headC. lookD. pay
11.A. encouragedB. relaxedC. determinedD. excited
12.A. frightenedB. embarrassedC. disappointedD. pleased
13.A. debatesB. thoughtsC. memoriesD. questions
14.A. concentrateB. continueC. adviseD. answer
15.A. confusionB. worryC. sadnessD. peace
16.A. PrideB. LaughterC. ShoutsD. Challenges
17.A. enjoyB. organizeC. supportD. take
18.A. decideB. forgetC. believeD. keep
19.A. lostB. unexpectedC. unknownD. buried
20.A. hidB. washedC. discoveredD. prepared
根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。
The benefits of keeping a journal(日志)
If you want to grow, one important thing you should do is keep a journal. It may seem simple, but it can make a big difference in your life. I have been keeping journals for years. Writing all the lessons I learn and all the ideas I get has become a habit for me. 1. Here are some benefits you will get by keeping a journal.
♦ It prevents you from losing an idea. Have you ever gotten an idea and lost it later because you didn’t write it down? 2. But then I developed the habit of writing down every idea that came into my mind as soon as possible. If I am away from my computer, I usually write it down on a piece of paper that I bring wherever I go. I will then transfer the idea to the journal in my computer.
♦ It helps you review all the lessons you’ve learned. By reviewing your journal, you can quickly see the lessons you’ve learned and the ideas you’ve gotten. 3. You can use the ideas to propel yourself forward.
♦ 4. After keeping a journal for years, you can look back at it and see how far you’ve gone. Things that were big problems in the past might seem small today. The raw ideas you had in the past have been realized today.
♦ It helps you expand your ideas. When you try to come up with a sentence to express an idea, you are thinking actively about it. 5. In the end, you will expand your ideas.
A.I often experienced that myself.
B.It trains you to express your thoughts.
C.It allows you to see your progress over time.
D.Just use whatever tool you feel comfortable with.
E.Thinking actively helps you connect your idea to another idea.
F.And to be honest, I can’t imagine what my life would be like without it.
G.Then you can do whatever necessary to avoid repeating the same mistakes.
Traveling by bicycle is a very popular means of transportation throughout China. China has a huge population, and it is said that there is at least one bicycle for every two people within the country. Of course, many people in China ride bicycles purely for sport or exercise, but it’s also a much more commonly accepted means of everyday transportation, as compared to countries such as the United States.
If you are living for a long period of time in China, chances are you will want to purchase your own bicycle so that you can use it whenever you want for transportation or just for the enjoyment of riding. Even if you don’t use a bicycle for everyday transportation, owning one can be a great way of enjoying some of the trails in the rural areas, just for fun. However, if you are just visiting China, renting a bicycle can be a more convenient choice.
It is important to choose the correct bicycle for your use. You’ll find that in China, the one-speed style of bicycle is extremely popular. These bicycles are great if you want to ride around in the city to see the sights. They are quite comfortable and easy to ride. You can often rent a bicycle for an entire day for around $15.
However, if you wish to ride on some of the rural paths, a mountain bike style would be a better choice. They are great for different kinds of road surfaces, providing for a safer ride. If you are planning to have a desire to tour and still be able to carry packages with you, then a touring bike would be the best choice. These are generally the most expensive to rent, but are extremely handy for carrying packages and even some of your luggage along with you.
1.The first paragraph probably tells us that ________.
A. riding bicycle is very popular to Chinese people
B. Chinese people use bicycles only for transportation
C. Americans use bicycles only for sport and exercise
D. Riding bicycles is the main means of transportation
2.If you are traveling in Beijing you’d better ________.
A. buy a bikeB. borrow a bikeC. steal a bikeD. rent a bike
3.Which of the following is the advantage of the one-speed bicycle?
A. It’s worth at least 15 dollars.
B. You can’t ride it in the countryside.
C. It is easy for you to travel in the city.
D. You have to return it the next day.
4.You would like to own a touring bike probably because ________.
A. you have to ride on the road in the countryside
B. you have some packages to carry while traveling
C. you want to enjoy the sights in the big cities
D. it is suitable for all kinds of road surfaces
Many people believe that you lose the ability to learn new languages as you get older. Language experts, however, will tell you that you’re never too old to learn a new language. As you get older, it can be more difficult to learn a new language, though.
Children and adults learn new languages in different ways. For children, language is their life. They study for thousands of hours every year, because they need to learn languages to become part of their communities. Adults, on the other hand, are already part of a language community. Learning a new language means becoming part of another language community, and adults rarely get the chance to practice as much as young children do.
Moreover, children learning a new language are expected to make mistakes. This gives them freedom when learning to be daring and confident. Adults, however, often feel pressured to be perfect when learning a new language. This can discourage many people and make it even harder to learn a new language.
When young children learn a new language, they come to see various languages as a “normal” part of society. This mindset （思维模式） helps them embrace learning a new language without feeling like they’re doing something unusual or “too hard”.
So if you want to learn a new language, go for it! It’s never too late to learn a new language. If you’re older, it may take more work, but it can be done. If you’re a young child, though, now is the time to step out and learn a new language!
1.By “Language is their life”, the author means that children ________.
A. can’t live without language
B. lead a happy life every day
C. practice a new language a lot
D. are taken good care of adults
2.What may make it hard for the old people to learn to a new language?
A. They are afraid of being laughed at.
B. They usually have too many interests.
C. They think making mistakes is natural.
D. They always make all kinds of mistakes.
3.Which of the following shows the difference between children and adults in learning a new language?
A. The behaviors they have.
B. The learning attitudes.
C. The future plans they have made.
D. The materials they are using.
4.According to the author, a new language ________.
A. can never be learned by the old people
B. can be grasped by the old people easily
C. can be understood only by the old people
D. can be learned by both the old and the young
