Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My friend Alice loved diving very much and she dreamed of become a professional diver one day. However, at an age of 14, she got a disease which caused her to become complete deaf. Many people thought a person was deaf would not be able to dive well and advised him to give up. But Alice had thought differently. She went to school on the morning and then spent every afternoon diving. It was really difficulty for a deaf girl to dive. Therefore, she kept practising every day. So far she has won several gold medal and is still trying hard to achieve more.

Answer

1.become→becoming

2.an→the

3.complete→completely

4.person后加who

5.him→her

6.去掉had

7.on→in

8.difficulty→difficult

9.Therefore→However

10.medal→medals

【解析】

试题分析：本文讲述了我的朋友爱丽丝克服困难成为职业跳水运动员的故事。

1.become→becoming of为介词，后接动名词，故become改为becoming。

2.an→the at the age of“在…岁时”，故用the。

3.complete→completely 副词修饰形容词，故用completely。

4.person后加who 此处为定语从句，缺少关系代词，先行词为人，故用who。

5.him→her 人称代词用错，是女孩，故用her。

6.去掉had 此处用过去时就可以了，不需用过去完成时。故去掉had。

7.on→in in the morning“在上午”，故改为in。

8.difficulty→difficult 此处系表结构，用形容词作表语，故difficulty改为difficult。

9.Therefore→However 此处前后位转折关系，故改成However。

10.medal→medals 前面有several修饰，故此处应用名词的复数，故medal改为medals。

【名师点睛】

短文改错口诀

名词数、动词形。

形副互混辩分明。

介词多用错与少，

连词转折与平行，

冠词错误常出现，

代词前后易错乱。

逻辑错误偶尔有，

认真阅读别遗漏。

考点：考查语篇理解和语法知识