Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

       2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My father is middle school teacher. He is a middle-aged man, so he works like a young man, full of energies. Every evening he is busy correcting his students’ exercises, prepare his lessons and doing some reading. Sometime when I wake up at midnight, I find him still busy on his work. Father puts all his heart and soul into his work. He cares for his students very much. If only his students have any difficulty, he will try his best to help us. When Father is in hospital last year, all his students went to see him. I was deep moved. Such is my father, and I love him very much.

Answer

1.is后加a

2.so→but

3.energies→energy

4.prepare→preparing

5.sometime→sometimes

6.on→with

7.去掉only

8.us→them

9.is→was

10.deep→deeply

【解析】

1. 考查冠词。句意：我的父亲是一位中学老师。第一次提到用a。

2.→but 考查连词。句意：他是个中年男士，但工作起来像个年轻人。根据句意可知表示转折。故把so改为but。

3.→energy 考查名词。句意：他是个中年男士，但工作起来像个年轻人，精力充沛。energy表“精力”是不可数名词。

4.→preparing 考查动词的用法。prepare与correcting和doing是并列的词，故要改为动名词形式。

5.→sometimes 考查副词。句意：有时当我半夜醒来，发现他还忙于工作。sometime某时；sometimes表示有时。

6.→with 考查介词。be busy with sth忙于做某事。

7. 考查连词。句意：如果他的学生有任何的困难，他会尽力帮他们。If表示“如果”；If only表示“只要”。

8.→them 考查代词。帮助学生，学生不只一个，故用them。

9.→was 考查动词的时态。根据时间状语last year可知，用一般过去时，故用was。

10.→deeply 考查副词。deep表示具体的深而deeply表示抽象的深，我被深深地打动了。

考点：考查语篇理解和词汇、语法知识。