Question

假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

Dear Diary,

Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He is lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room to my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am very tiring, but I know I’ll never fall asleep.

Good night or remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir of my past life and my only friend.

Yours,

Rosemary

Answer

1.去掉far

2.move→moved

3.other→another

4.classmate→classmates

5.or→and

6.bad→worse

7.my前面的to→with

8.first前加上my/the

9.tiring→tired

10.is→are

【解析】

试题分析：因为家庭原因，作者搬家，在新的学校上学，日记是他对过去生活的唯一纪念品。

1. 考查副词用法。Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse.(去掉far，far不与确切的数字连用。)

2. 考查时态。Do you want to know why we move last week? (改成moved，根据last week，应用一般过去时。)

3. 考查代词用法。He was lucky to find other one.(改成another，另一个应用another)

4. 考查名词单复数。His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate，my school or just everything else I love in the world.(改成classmates，我的同学应该不止一个，故应用复数形式)

5. 考查连词。His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate，my school or just everything else I love in the world.(改成and，我跟我的同学，我的学校以及我喜爱的一切说再见，我的同学，我的学校以及我喜爱的一切是并列关系，故改成and)

6.bad→worse 考查形容词和前后文逻辑。To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie.(改成worse，让事情变得更糟糕，to make matters worse；前后是递进关系，故用比较级)

7.my前面的to→with 固定词组：share with sb.和某人分享，故把to改为with。

8.first前加上my/the 考查冠词。Tomorrow is first day of school.前加the或my，序数词不能单独作定语，要与冠词或形容性物主代词搭配使用。）

9. 考查形容词。I am awfully tiring, but I know I’ll never fall sleep.(改成tired，tiring表事物的性质，tired表感受。)

10. 考查主谓一致。Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend. (改成are，因为主语是you，dear diary是you的同位语，不是主语，故系动词要用are)

【知识归纳】

不规则形容词、副词的比较级和最高级

good（adj.)better best；well（adj.and adv.） better best；bad（adj.) worse worst；ill（adj.) worse worst；badly（adv.） worse worst；many（adj.and adv.) more most；much（adj.and adv.) more most；far（adj.and adv.) farther ,further farthest,furthest；little(adj.and adv.) less least；old(adj.) older,elder oldest,eldest；late(adj.) later,latter latest,last

考点：考查语篇理解和词汇、语法知识