假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Helen Keller who was born in America in June, 1890. Her birth brought much happiness to her parents. But when she was 19 month old, she became deaf and blind because a serious fever. Living in a world where she could see and hear nothing, she almost lost the hope to live. However, at seven, she met her teacher, calling Anne Sullivan. At first, it was hard for Anne to teach so a disabled girl. Helen’s strong will and cleverness together with Anne’s skill and patience finally helped to create a wonder. Helen learned to speak, read and even play piano. Later, she finished his college education and get a degree in English literature. Helen wrote many books, of which “The Story of My Life” was the most famous. Helen was also devoted to help other disabled people like herself. She moved both the USA or the world.
单词拼写：
1.________ (显然) he is interested in music as well as in painting.
2.Everyone was silent as the judge ________ (宣布) the winner of the competition.
3.The government has been ________ (批评) for not taking the problem seriously.
4.The sufferings are__________(暂时的)．Keep up your spirit and you'll get over them.
5.If you want a__________(永久的)job，you will have to be devoted to improving your skills.
6.He helped his__________(同伴)out of trouble.
7.I noticed a snake__________(爬行)along the path.
8.He is__________(坚定的)to win this game.
9.These goods will be__________(运送)to the disaster－hit area.
10.The slavery was__________(废除)in the end.
11.When his mother came in，he__________(假装)to be asleep
12.She made a__________(具体的)description of the traffic accident.
13.They__________(抗议)and in the end the government gave in.
14.Don't be__________(涉及)in their quarrel.
15. The boy__________(搁下)his bag on the desk and then began to read.
阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容或括号内单词的正确形式。
Maybe you never opened that account (账户)．But someone else 1._______—someone who used your name，your credit card number or your 2._______(person) information to commit fraud (造假) without letting you know, 3.________is actually a crime，pure and simple.
The biggest problem is 4._______(probable) that you may not know that someone has taken away your identity5._______you notice that something is wrong：you may get bills for 6.________credit card account you never opened，your credit report may include debts you never knew you had, 7.________you may see charges on your bills that you didn’t sign for，and even don’t know anything about.
If your identity 8.____(steal) like that，the Federal Trade Commission(FTC) suggests that you 9.________(take) at least two actions immediately.
First，contact the fraud departments of the major credit offices and ask them 10.________copies of your credit reports.
Then，review your reports carefully to check your corrections and changes.
阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
The world always makes way for the dreamer.
When I was twelve years old, my father took me to see Zig Zigler. I remember sitting in that dark hall listening to Mr. Zigler everyone’s spirits up to the ceiling. I there feeling like I could do anything. When we got to the car, I turned to my father and said, “Dad, I want to people feel like that.” My father asked me I meant. “I want to be a motivational(激发积极性的)speaker just like Mr. Zigler,” I replied. A（An） was born.
Recently, I began seeking my dream of motivating others. a four-year relationship with Fortune 100 Company as a sales-trainer and ending as a regional(地区的) sales manager, I left the company at the height of my . Many people were that I would leave after earning a six-figure income(收入). And they wondered__ I would risk everything for a dream.
I made my to start my own company and leave my worryingless position(职位)after ___ a regional sales meeting. The vice-president of our company made a that changed my life. He asked us, “If a god would offer you three wishes, what would they be?” After giving us a to write down the three wishes, he then asked us, “Why do you need a ?” I would never forget the power I felt at that moment. I realized that I had accomplished in the past had prepared me for this moment. I was ready and didn’t need a god’s help to become a motivational speaker. A motivational speaker was .
Having made that decision, I was immediately _. One week after I gave notice, my husband was laid off (下岗) from his job, and now we had no . But I held fast to my dream. The wonder really began to happen. In a short time my husband found a better job. And I was able to book several engagements（业务）with new customers. I discovered the unbelievable power of dreams.
1.A. rise B. do C. put D. raise
2.A. left B. came C. arrived D. reached
3.A. get B. hope C. make D. cheer
4.A. that B. what C. which D. if
5.A. dream B. idea C. girl D. speaker
6.A. After B. Before C. Because D. While
7.A. beginning B. working C. acting D. regarding
8.A. life B. love C. money D. career
9.A. disappointed B. moved C. surprised D. delighted
10.A. when B. why C. if D. how
11.A. plan B. promise C. decision D. mind
12.A. attending B. joining C. entering D. holding
13.A. newspaper B. book C. report D. speech
14.A. day B. instant C. week D. moment
15.A. love B. worker C. god D. company
16.A. everything B. anything C. nothing D. something
17.A. alive B. dead C. missing D. born
18.A. examined B. searched C. found D. tested
19.A. help B. harm C. income D. money
20.A. selling B. speaking C. writing D. listening
根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。
We are familiar with an old saying that “Clothes make the man”，which means goodlooking outfits may possibly make a person better respected and look more like a true gentleman.__ 1._ Naturally，he may be well respected and gracefully treated even though he doesn't seem so respectable as others imagined. Instead，if a man is poorly or commonly dressed，he can't avoid being looked down upon and unfairly treated，_2._ As far as these people are concerned，what one wears is taken as an essential signal of status and an expression of characteristics. Consequently，clothes do seem to help make a good impression on others，and gain more respect.
__3._ I think the good impression one leaves on others based on clothes doesn't last long. Only good internal quality and beauty will impress people forever and never fade.__ 4.__ On the contrary，when people who are fascinated by a person's clothes eventually find out that he is an undesirable person，they would think he is pretentious and may even treat him with contempt(蔑视)．On top of this，people who attach too much importance to clothes would waste their time and money on it. Besides，it adversely affects their effort on the things that really matter.
In summary，__5.__Nothing can count more than good internal quality in building up the man. Therefore only one's internal beauty and knowledge are more decisive of a person's value.
A．clothes do help in making an initial image，but do not make the man.
B．As a result，all the people spare no money to buy expensive fine clothes.
C．Clothes just make a man look better but will in no sense make a better person.
D．But I have a different view on this issue.
E．Thus，a man should be always dressed like a gentleman.
F．for many people judge others only by the way they dress.
G．If a man is well dressed，he will probably gain more confidence and dignity.
In the old days, children were familiar with birth and death as part of life. Now this is perhaps the first generation of American youngsters who have never been close by during of the birth a baby and have never experienced the death of a family member.
Nowadays when people grow old, we often send them to nursing homes. When they get sick, we send them to a hospital, where children are forbidden to visit terminally （晚期的）in patients— even when those patients are their parents. This deprives（剥夺）the dying patient of family members during the last few days of his life and it deprives the children of an experience of death, which is an important learning experience.
Some of my colleagues and I once interviewed and followed about 500 terminally in order to find out what they could teach us and how we could be of more benefit, not just to them but to the members of their families as well. We were most impressed by the fact that even those patients who were not told of their serious illness were quite aware of its potential（潜在的）outcome.
It is important for family members, and doctors and nurses to understand these patients’ communication in order to truly understand their needs, fears and fantasies （幻想）. Most of our patients welcomed another human being with whom they could talk openly, honestly, and frankly about their trouble. Many of them shared with us their great need to be informed, to be kept up - to - date on their medical condition and to be told when the end was near. We found out that patients who had been dealt with openly and frankly were better able to cope with the coming of detach and finally to reach a true stage of acceptance before death.
1.The elders of today's Americans________ .
A. are often absent when a family member is born or dying
B. are unfamiliar with birth and death
C. usually see the birth or death of a family member
D. have often experienced the fear of death as part of life
2.Children in America are deprived of the chance to________.
A. visit a patient at hospital
B. visit their family members
C. learn how to face death
D. look after the patients
3.The need of a dying patient for people to accompany（陪伴）him shows________.
A. his wish for communication with other people
B. his fear of death
C. his unwillingness to die
D. he feels very upset about his condition
4.It may be concluded from the passage that________.
A. dying patients should be truthfully informed of their condition
B. dying patients are afraid of being told of the coming of death
C. most patients are unable to accept death until it can’t be avoided
D. most doctors and nurses understand what dying patients need
