Question

假如你是李明，(a junior from the Civil Engineering School), 请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封投诉信，内容可涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境和服务等。

注意： 1、可适当添加细节使文章连贯；字数100左右;

       2、信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear President,

     My name is Li Ming，

______________________________________________________________________________________

                                                                   Sincerely yours,

                                                                    Li Ming

Answer

Dear President,

My name is Li Ming， a junior from the Civil Engineering School. I am writing to make a complaint about the canteen service of our school.

The focus of the complaint is the poor quality and high price of the food. In the first place, the rice is very hard, the steam bread is often cold, and the vegetables are always overcooked. In addition, the price of the food is so high that many poor students are burdened heavily. Under these circumstances, I find it impossible for us students to fully concentrate on the study and enjoy the campus life.

I will be very obliged if you can consider my complaint seriously. I do hope the service of the canteen will be much improved as soon as possible. Thank you for your time and kind consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：假如你是李明，(a junior from the Civil Engineering School), 请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封投诉信，内容可涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境和服务等。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。 注意： 1、可适当添加细节使文章连贯；字数100左右; 2、信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。the price of the food is so high that many poor students are burdened heavily. so……that句型的使用。I will be very obliged if you can consider my complaint seriously。条件状语从句的使用。I do hope the service of the canteen will be much improved as soon as possible.宾语从句的使用加上对谓语的强调。连接词的使用也为文章增色许多：In the first place, In addition, Under these circumstances。