假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have planned an autumn outing for my class next week, and I’m writing to ask your permission.
First, the place where we’ve decided to visit — the Forest Park is not far away from the city. We can take a bus and ride a bike to get there. Second, the trip would provide us with a great opportunity to get close to the nature. Third, we need to spare some time to take some physical exercises. Some teachers as well as Mr Wang is going to join us to make sure of our safe.
We are all looking forward to receive your permission. We will appreciate you if you can kindly give us an immediate reply.
阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。
My interest in Chinese food started years ago, when I was a young reporter for the Washington Post. Our office wasn’t far from Chinatown, 1. I found some very good Chinese restaurants.
That was the first time that I 2. (notice) the fresh taste of the meat and vegetables of Chinese food. When I learned more about the food, I began to understand why 3. has this special feature.
Many years ago, China had 4. energy crisis because it lost much of its wood due to over population and poor management of its forests. This 5. (lose) was very bad for the country, of course, but it turned out to be very good for the food. Wood became very expensive and hard to get, so the Chinese had to either find a substitute for their 6. (value) wood, or learn how to use it better. There weren’t any substitutes so people found ways to economize.
In order to economize in cooking, they had to use very little wood. So they started cutting their meat and vegetables 7. small pieces before they put them in the hot oil. That way, the food cooked 8. (fast) and they saved more fuel. The food 9. (prepare) in this way kept its fresh flavor — and it’s this flavor 10. attracts people from other countries to the art of Chinese cooking.
单词拼写
1.He is a social boy, ____________(更喜欢) talking face to face to chatting online.
2.I found him ___________(埋头) in reading when I came in.
3.Since everyone is born ________(平等), why can’t the workers demand higher salaries?
4.The villages __________(毁坏) completely in the earthquake has been rebuilt.
5.The ___________(大学毕业生) are not in great demand nowadays.
6.—Do you mean that we are stuck here?
—__________(确实如此), my dear.
7.He lay beneath his _________(枕头) and soon fell asleep.
8.The smoke rose___________(直直地) up into the air and disappeared.
9.Her _______________(电子的) dictionary is not so useful as before.
10.It is unfair that he gets very little in ________(报答) for his hard work.
11.The house________(属于) to him was sold out.
12.The __________(入口) to the hall has been blocked.
13.__________(如今) more and more students are addicted to computer games.
14.We have been _____________(罚款) for parking the car in an improper place.
15.All his dreams have come into _____________(现实).
16.Xi’an __________(事变) had a deep influence on him at that time.
17.Those _____________(过路人) were indifferent to the beggar.
18.A _______________(某个) girl fell in love with him.
19.His ___________(身体的) condition is not satisfactory.
20.He ____________(继任) his father as the manager when he retired.
阅读下面的短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
As soon as I saw the cat in our yard, I knew he was a stray (流浪儿). He looked ________—a wounded warrior with a badly scarred body.
I started putting out food for him each day, but he wouldn’t come near me if other people were ________. Winter came, and he still wouldn’t ________ us. Then, one day, a car hit him so we took him to the vet’s.
After a week, we were eager to bring him home to ________ our family. But when we went to take the cat home, the vet told us we should put him to ________ immediately because the cat was so fierce and mean that he would ________ become tame, let alone a pet.
But I have always had ________ in love’s power to ________ even the wildest beasts. I told the vet, “I want to take him home.” We ________ him Paws.
Three days went by, and we only knew Paws was ________ the bed because when we walked past it we heard deep growling.
I wanted to somehow let him know he was ________ and loved. So I put on a hard hat and a pair of welding gloves. I ________ under the bed toward Paws, with my face to the ________ and only the top of my head facing him. I ________ out to stroke (抚摩) him gently over and over again.
He growled and tried to ________ and bite me. It was scary—but I knew he couldn’t ________ me, so I just kept going. Slowly, he began to ________. Then I slid out from under the bed and left the room.
Several hours later, I noticed a cat on the bed. It was Paws—all ________ on the pillows! I couldn’t believe it.
That dear cat became the ________ of our household. Although Paws finally died of cancer, his legacy(遗赠)—my ________ and firm belief in the power of love — lives on.
1.A. cuteB. strongC. fierceD. smart
2.A. aroundB. inC. outD. away
3.A. loveB. attackC. refuseD. trust
4.A. pleaseB. joinC. seeD. satisfy
5.A. deathB. sightC. observationD. sleep
6.A. simplyB. hardlyC. easilyD. gradually
7.A. senseB. interestC. faithD. feeling
8.A. comfortB. convinceC. protectD. tame
9.A. namedB. appointedC. acceptedD. made
10.A. onB. besideC. underD. inside
11.A. hopefulB. pitifulC. carefulD. safe
12.A. hidB. slidC. shelteredD. slept
13.A. bedB. skyC. floorD. feet
14.A. turnedB. pickedC. pulledD. reached
15.A. playB. scratchC. lickD. push
16.A. hurtB. botherC. avoidD. betray
17.A. get angryB. give upC. run awayD. calm down
18.A. stepped outB. stood out
C. stretched outD. stuck out
19.A. hopeB. loveC. supportD. comfort
20.A. normalB. nobleC. strangeD. continued
根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。
How Not to Be Awkward
Not all of us are outgoing and ready to take the world by storm. 1. This usually happens when a person is still in his or her teen years and going through the socialization process. So, what can a person do to overcome this tendency to be awkward. Let’s try to find answers to the questions.
Stay in shape and dress up well
Sometimes, awkwardness could be due to being overweight. When you are large in size, you tend to get very self-conscious. So, in order to avoid this, get into the habit of exercising every day. 2. If you look as if you have just stepped out of a 1980’s film when actually it is 2011, there is no doubt that you are bound to feel awkward about yourself.
Be optimistic
Another effective tip on how not to feel awkward is to always keep a smile on your face. 3. On the other hand, a smiling, happy and positive think person is appreciated by everybody. So, smile when you meet acquaintances or even strangers, say a cheerful “Hi!” and automatically some of your awkwardness will disappear completely!
Participate in team activities
This one really helps. Awkwardness generally develops when a person remains isolated from others. So,in order to change this situation, join groups. 4. Joining people in book reading sessions as well as debates will help remove your awkwardness. Choose any activity of your choice, such as playing team sports or joining a dance class, and soon you will find your comfort level around people increasing day by day!
Develop your personality
Being a book-worm or an Internet addict will not get you anywhere. For self-improvement, take up a hobby that adds meaning to your life. Learn singing or try adventure sports. 5.
A. Learn how to end a conversation.
B. Secondly, have appropriate clothes on.
C. For instance, if you are a reading lover, join a book club.
D. If you look sad, nobody will actually like being with you.
E. Something as simple as listening to music will do wonders too.
F. Many among us are shy and may even feel kept apart from others.
G. Awkwardness could be because you do not have anything in common to talk about.
It has always been thought that alcohol causes people to put on weight because it contains a lot of sugar, but new research suggests a glass a day could form part of a diet. Looking at past studies they found that, while heavy drinkers do put on weight; those who drink in moderation can actually lose weight.
A spokesman for the research team at Navarro University in Spain says, “Light to moderate alcohol intake, especially of wine, may be more likely to protect against, rather than promote, weight gain.” The International Scientific Forum on Alcohol research reviewed the findings and agreed with most of the conclusions, particularly that data do not clearly indicate if moderate drinking increases weight.
Boston University’s Dr. Harvey Finkel found that the biologic mechanisms(生物学机制) relating alcohol to changes in body weight are not properly understood. His team pointed out the strong protective effects of moderate drinking on the risk of getting conditions like diabetes(糖尿病), which relate to increasing obesity. Some studies suggest that even very obese people may be at lower risk of diabetes if they are moderate drinkers.
The group says alcohol provides calories that are quickly absorbed into the body and are not stored in fat, and that this process could explain the differences in its effects from those of other foods. They agree that future research should be directed towards assessing the roles of different types of alcoholic drinks, taking into consideration drinking patterns and including the past tendency of participants to gain weight.
For now there is little evidence that consuming small to moderate amounts of alcohol on a regular basis increases one’s risk of becoming obese. What’s more, a study three years ago suggested that resveratrol, a compound present in grapes and red wine destroys fat cells.
1.The passage is mainly for those ________.
A. who produce wineB. who have a drinking habit
C. who go on a dietD. who are eager to lose weight
2.How does the writer clarify his view at the very beginning?
A. By quotation.B. By comparison.
C. By question.D. By statement.
3.What can we learn from the passage?
A. Current data clearly show that moderate drinking increases weight.
B. Resveratrol is proved to increase the risk of becoming fat.
C. The research found moderate drinking has a strong protective effect.
D .The specific roles of different types of alcoholic drinks are very clear.
4.What is most likely to be discussed in the paragraph that follows?
A. How to do some easy experiments.
B. How to reduce the calories contained in wine.
C. How to prove the finding mentioned above.
D. How to make wine in a healthy way.
