假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My four-year-old son ran down the stairs very excitedly in Christmas morning and went straight for the gifts under the tree. And, to my surprise, the first gift he grabbed was a gift he had been made for his father and me. He stood there with joys and patience as we opened our gift. When I saw the gift, that was a hand-made wreath made his small handprints, I started to cry. My husband leaned over and asked how I was crying. I said I can not believe the thoughtfulness of this child. My son was most exciting about giving us the present he had made for us. I felt proud for him. That is actually the best gift I received for Christmas.
1.The history students hoped to compare the ________(文明) of ancient China and Japan.
2.What a ________(巧合)！I wasn't expecting to see you here.
3.Animals can become unusually ________(好斗的) when they are upset by a sudden environmental change.
4.The company has been ________(转变) from a family business to a multimillionpound operation.
5.________(担着) with the necessities, we made it convenient for our travel.
6.Everyone in my office likes Smith, because he is very ________(灵活的) in dealing with relations.
7.The heating system in the hotel has an __________(自动的) temperature control.
8.It's __________(不合法的) to read other people's private letters without their permission.
9.It's a pity that there were only more than one hundred ________(幸存者) in the earthquake that happened in Lushan country.
10.In nature，there are lots of violent ______(现象) which man is still unable to deal with.
11.Countless people have made great ______(贡献) to the development of our nation.
12.Large quantities of money were ________(捐助) to the drought-hit areas in the south of China in the spring of 2010.
13.There are three ________ (候选人) standing in the election of the director.
14.Interest is the best teacher, so a lack of interest is a(n) ________ (保证) of failure.
15.A number of ________ (潜在的) buyers have expressed interest in the company and placed an order for some of its products.
阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容或括号内单词的正确形式。
On keeping a Diary in English
Keeping a diary in English is one of the 1.__ __ (effect) ways to improve our English writing ability.
2._____ (compare) with other forms of writing, it is shorter and takes 3.____ time. It can help us to develop the habit of thinking in English. 4._____ we persist in this practice, gradually we’ll learn how to express ourselves in English. In keeping a diary in English, we certainly run up against many 5.__ __（difficult）. In the first place, 6.___ often happens that we have trouble 7._______(find) appropriate words and phrases to give expression to our mind. Secondly, there are many idiomatic ways of saying things in Chinese. And it is extremely hard for us to put them into English properly.
As far as I 8._ __ (concern), my suggestion is that we should always have a notebook and a Chinese-English dictionary within easy reach. Whenever something beats us, we can first put it down in our notebook and then consult our dictionary. We can also turn to our English teacher for help, if necessary. In short, I believe that it is 9._____ great use to keep a diary in English for 10._____ development of our writing skills.
阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
One fine afternoon I was walking along the Fifth Avenue, when I remembered that it was necessary to buy a pair of socks. I ________ the first sock shop that caught my eye, and ________, not more than 17, came forward. "What can I do for you, sir?" "I wish to ________ a pair of socks." ________ glowed. "Did you know that you had come into ________ in the world to buy socks?" I had not been ________ that, as my entrance had been accidental．"Come with me, "said the boy happily．He began to ________ down from the shelves box after box．
"________, boy, I'm going to buy only one pair!" "I know that, but I want you to see how beautiful these are. Aren't they wonderful?" There was ________ an expression of joy, ________ he were revealing(透露） to me the ________ of his religion．I became far more interested in him than in the socks．"My friend, "said I, "if this is ________ the enthusiasm from freshness, and you can keep it up ________, in ten years you’ll own every sock in the United States."
My amazement at his pride in ________ will be understood by all who read this article．In many shops the customer has to wait for someone to ________ him．When ________ some clerk does notice you, you are made to feel as if you were interrupting him. ________ possibly that very clerk who is now so ________ began his career with enthusiasm．The freshness ________; He became a mechanical salesman.
I’ve observed such change in the lives of so many men in so many occupations that I've come to the ________ that the fastest road to failure is to do things mechanically.
1.A．turned intoB．broke intoC．came acrossD．met with
2.A．a female clerkB．a boy clerkC．a girl clerkD．an old man
3.A．buyB．findC．seeD．have
4.A．His faceB．The roomC．His eyesD．The fire
5.A．the worstB．the right placeC．the wrongD．the best place
6.A．curious aboutB．aware ofC．sensitive toD．attached to
7.A．pushB．forceC．lookD．drag
8.A．Hold upB．Just you waitC．Hold onD．Hang up
9.A．on his faceB．to my surprise
C．for some reasonD．to some degree
10.A．whenB．as ifC．even ifD．while
11.A．beliefsB．storiesC．valuesD．mysteries
12.A．hardlyB．onlyC．no more thanD．not merely
13.A．day after dayB．day by day
C．the other dayD．to this day
14.A．passionB．salesmanshipC．enthusiasmD．job
15.A．serve onB．care forC．wait uponD．deal with
16.A．accidentallyB．occasionally
C．finallyD．disrespectfully
17.A．YetB．SoC．ThenD．For
18.A．enthusiasticB．unconcernedC．differentD．responsible
19.A．wore ofB．wore onC．wore overD．wore off
20.A．responseB．realizationC．conclusionD．circumstance
根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。
Nowadays, more and more parents are using a new technology, home security systems, to keep an eye on their “home-alone” children. In the early days of home security, the systems were basically designed just to keep the bad guys out. ___1.___ But be sure, when no adult is present, he or she knows how to do so safely.
Every child should memorize his or her own full name and address, and home, work and cellphone numbers of each parent. ___2.___If your child is too young to memorize the information, he or she may be too young to be home alone — for any time.
____3._____If a door or window is slightly open, the child has any reason to suspect someone has been in the house that shouldn’t be, have him or her call you, then wait at the nearby home of a neighbour who’s agreed to act as a safe house...
____4.__Besides, set a rule that he or she must never play outside the house when no one else is at home.
Be sure your child knows how to disarm (解除) and arm your home security system. Program your control panel (控制板) to give you a message when your child enters or leaves the house, and arms or disarms the system. __5.____
If you want to learn more about home security systems that can help parents protect their “home-alone” children, you can visit www.ProtectAmerica.com.
A. Warn your home-alone child never to answer the doorbell or telephone.
B. You and your child should work together to use the home security systems.
C. At present, the systems are only intended for home-alone children.
D. Teach your child to observe things when returning to the house.
E. Also keep this information posted next to the phone at home.
F. Now, many parents are also using them to make their home-alone children safe.
G. If your child forgets to rearm the system, you can call him or her with a personal reminder.
Autumn means different things to different people. “It all depends on your personality，” said British naturalist Richard Mabey. “Personality shapes your view of the season，” he said. “You may see it as a fading-away，a packing-up (结束)，or as a time of packing in another sense—the exciting gathering of resources before a long journey.”
If this is true，perhaps it tells us a little about，for instance，Thomas Hood，the 19th Century English poet. About November，he wrote：
No warmth，no cheerfulness，no healthful ease
No shade，no shine，no butterflies，no bees
November!
On the other hand，another English poet John Keats，already sensing he was seriously ill，was inspired by a late September day to pen one of the most famous poems in the English language—To Autumn. He wrote to a friend afterwards that there was something comforting and healing about it.
According to Richard Mabey，Keats has the biological evidence on his side. Autumn is not a time of slowing down，but a time of new beginnings and great movements of creatures. For example，just at the moment that Keats's “gathering swallows” (in To Autumn)are departing for Africa，millions of creatures are fleeing from the frozen north like Iceland，Greenland and Russia to winter along the east and south coasts of Britain. According to scientists，before falling，the leaves transfer their chlorophyll(叶绿素) and carbohydrates into the woody parts of the tree for safe keeping over winter. What remains is the natural antioxidants (防老剂) in the leaves: the yellow and orange carotenoids (类胡萝卜素)，and another protective chemical specially produced for autumn，the bright-red anthocyanin (花青素)．High colour is not a signal of deterioration (退化) and decline，but of detox (排毒的) ability and good health.
A century after Keats，the American poet Loren Eiseley wrote in his journal: “Suppose we saw ourselves burning-like maples in a golden autumn. And that we could break up like autumn leaves...dropping their substance like chlorophyll. Wouldn't our attitude towards death be different？”
1.From Thomas Hood's poem，we may infer that ________.
A．he suffered a lot from cold November
B．he missed the shining summer days very much
C．he had a negative attitude towards autumn
D．he enjoyed butterflies and bees very much
2.In autumn，leaves turn yellow before falling because ________.
A．they can't bear the freezing
B．they can't get enough water from the wood part
C．chlorophyll and carbohydrates have been lost through leaves
D．chlorophyll and carbohydrates have come back to the wood part
3.From the passage we can learn that ________.
A．autumn has different faces in different people's eyes
B．John Keats was a good biologist as well as a poet
C．all creatures move from the cold north to Britain for winter
D．the three poets were only known for their poems about autumn
4.Which word can best describe Loren Eiseley's attitude towards autumn?
A．Fearful.B．Optimistic.C．Doubtful.D．Realistic.
