Question

假如你是新华中学学生李华，在最近举行的市高中生英语口语大赛中获得了一等奖。某英语报社邀请你写一篇稿件，介绍你练习英语口语的经验。稿件内容如下：

(1) 树立自信，克服羞怯心理；

(2) 多参加英语角活动；

(3) 多看英语新闻（如CCTV-9）

注意：1.词数：100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

I'm Li Hua from Xinghua Middle School. _________________________________

Answer

I'm Li Hua from Xinghua Middle School. Now I'd like to share my experience in practicing oral English. Firstly, I'm always confident and brave. I seize every opportunity to speak, not afraid of making mistakes which may embarrass me. I also find it of great benefit to take part in English corners, where I make many friends. By talking with them, my oral English has improved a lot. Finally, some English programs like CCTV-9 contribute to the progress in my speaking ability. Through this channel, not only am I kept informed of the current events going on both at home and abroad, I also learn the standard pronunciation and intonation by repeated imitation. Practice makes perfect, as the saying goes. Our hard work will finally be rewarded.

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇英语稿件，介绍你练习英语口语的经验。要点已给出，写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：词数100左右。

【名师点睛】

本文内容齐全，布局合理，文中使用高级句子。I seize every opportunity to speak, not afraid of making mistakes which may embarrass me.形容词性短语作伴随状语，同时句中运用which引导的限制性定语从句；I also find it of great benefit to take part in English corners, where I make many friends.此句中it作形式宾语，动词不定式作真正的宾语，同时句中where引导非限制性定语从句；Through this channel, not only am I kept informed of the current events going on both at home and abroad, I also learn the standard pronunciation and intonation by repeated imitation.句中not only…but also的部分倒装堪称经典；Practice makes perfect, as the saying goes.as引导的非限制性定语从句和名句完美结合。