Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；

      2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The other day, some of my classmates and I took a bicycle trip along the “Ren Min Road”, where was specially built for people to relax ourselves. The scenery along the road was fascinating, with trees, flowers, hills and lakes on both side. We stopped by a lake for a rest, where a good many of people were playing happily. But something unpleasant catch our attention. There was rubbish here or there, and there were many plastic bags and bottles floated on the surface of the lake. Such beautiful place was so serious polluted. What a shame! In the end, we couldn’t help collecting the rubbish after we left.

Answer

1.where→which; 2.ourselves→themselves; 3. side→sides / both→either;4. many后面的of去掉; 5. catch→caught 6. or→and; 7. floated→floating; 8. Such后加a； 9. serious→seriously; 10. after→before/ when

【解析】本文讲述了作者和同学在人民路上骑自行车游玩，看到附近的一个湖上漂满了垃圾，大煞风景，于是作者临走之时和同学一起捡了垃圾。

1.此处the “Ren Min Road”作先行词，指物，在后面的非限制性定语从句中做主语，故把where改为which。

2.句意：建这条路的目的是让人们放松他们自己。relax oneself放松自己，根据句意可知把ourselves改为themselves。

3.句意：在路的两边或在路的每一边。both sides和either side都表示“路的两边”，故本题有两种改法，或把side改为sides，或把both改为either。

4.a good many+名词复数，意思是“许多”，故在many后加of。

5.句意：一些不愉快的事情引起了我们的注意。根据文章开头The other day几天前的某一天，可知此处用一般过去时态，故把catch改为caught。

6.固定搭配：here and there到处，故把or改为and。

7.句意：在湖面上飘着很多塑料袋和瓶子。此处是现在分词作后置定语，故把floated改为floating。

8.句意：一个如此美丽的地方受到如此严重的污染。place是单数，故在Such后加a。

9.副词修饰动词，故把serious改为seriously。

10.句意：最后，我们离开之前或离开的时候，我们情不自禁地捡垃圾。根据句意可知，把after改为before/ when。