Question

假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack发邮件请你介绍一下中国的传统节日——清明节。请根据以下要点，给他回一封邮件。

    1．清明节在每年的四月五日前后；    2．人们在清明节要扫墓祭祖；

    3．正值万物复苏之际，人们可以踏青春游，享受假期。

    注意：1).词数：100左右; 清明节 the Qingming Festival 

墓地  grave sites

2).可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer

Dear Jack，

Glad to hear from you. I’d like to tell you something that is about the Qingming Festival.

The Qingming Festival is a traditional Chinese festival which usually falls around April 5 every year. People often hold memorial services for their ancestors at grave sites by bringing some flowers and sweeping the tombs. Then all the family members sit together，talking about the family history and sharing traditional meals. Today we have a holiday every year on this traditional Chinese festival. People can go on family outings，fly kites and enjoy the coming of spring.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一封电子邮件，向英国笔友Jack发邮件介绍中国的传统节日——清明节。1．清明节在每年的四月五日前后；2．人们在清明节要扫墓祭祖；3．正值万物复苏之际，人们可以踏青春游，享受假期。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：词数：100左右;

【名师点睛】

本文是一篇电子邮件，格式正确，内容齐全，简洁明了，布局合理，使用高级句子。I’d like to tell you something that is about the Qingming Festival.

定语从句使用恰当；The Qingming Festival is a traditional Chinese festival which usually falls around April 5 every year. which引导定语从句；Then all the family members sit together，talking about the family history and sharing traditional meals.现在分词做伴随状态；People can go on family outings，fly kites and enjoy the coming of spring.并列谓语巧妙运用，the coming of堪称精彩。