Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：(1)每处错误及其修改均限一词。

(2)只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

   The earthquake affects the students of the destroying areas in many ways. How can we help them? One expert says the child will have feelings of fear, angry and feel they are not safe after the quake. They will find it hardly to focus. They will tend to cry and shout and tremble. And they might be afraid to be alone. The teenagers will find it difficulty to live in a balanced way. If things get worse they might not be able to focus to their studies. He also says we can do something help the children. The first thing we can do is that to build up trust with them, and be their friends. Then you have to give them a sense of safe. Thirdly, try to satisfy their psychological needs. Be a good listener, if he or she need to talk.

Answer

1. destroying ---destroyed

2. child---children

3. angry----anger

4. hardly----hard

5. difficulty----difficult

6. (focus) to --- on

7. do something help中help前加to

8. the first thing is that to 中去掉that

9. safe----safety

10. need----needs

【解析】1.句意：被毁掉的地区。此处是过去分词做前置定语，故把destroying ---destroyed。

2.句意：一位专家说孩子有害怕、生气的感觉。根据句意可知此处用名词复数，故把child---children。

3.句意：一位专家说孩子有害怕、生气的感觉。可知此处的“生气”要用名词形式，故把angry----anger。

4.句意：他们发现集中精力是困难的。根据句意可知把hardly----hard

5.固定句型：find+it+形容词+to do sth.可知此处用形容词做宾语补足语，故把difficulty----difficult。

6.固定搭配：focus on集中精力在---。故把(focus) to --- on。

7.此处时动词不定式做后置定语，故在do something help中help前加to。

8.此处时动词不定式作表语，故the first thing is that to 中去掉that

9.句意：a sense of safety安全感。所以用名词形式，故把safe----safety。

10.此处是if引导的条件状语从句，主句是祈使句，表示将来，所以从句用一般现在时态，主语是单数第三人称，故把need----needs。