Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有

10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处

加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Tina and I had been good friend for years. We often did things together, so one day Tina didn’t talk to me and just sat by herself. I don’t know what was wrong. I thought about what I had done and said recent. Was Tina upset because I had done well in the history test than her? No, she was happy that I did well in school. I decided find out what was the matter. I walked over to there Tina was sitting. “Tina,” I said softly, “is anything wrong?” He answered sadly, “Yes, my cat died on last night.” I finally knew the reason what she didn’t talk to me and comforted her.

Answer

Tina and I had been good for years. We often did things together,  one day Tina didn’t talk to me and just sat by herself. I know what was wrong. I thought about what I had done and said . Was Tina upset because I had done  in the history test than her? No, she was happy that I did  in school. I decided  find out what was the matter. I walked over to  Tina was sitting. “Tina,” I said softly, “is anything wrong?”  answered sadly, “Yes, my cat died on last night.” I finally knew the reason she didn’t talk to me and comforted her.

【解析】1.句意：Tina和我是多年的好朋友。根据句意可知此处名词用复数形式，故把friend改成friends。

2.此句是一个并列句，上半句意思是“我们经常一起做事情”，下半句“一天Tina不和我说话，只是独自坐着”。可知表示一种转折关系，故把so改成but。

3.句意：我不知道哪错了。根据上文可知用一般过去时态，故把don’t改成didn’t。

4.句意：我最近考虑我做过的事和说过的话。副词修饰动词，故把recent改成recently。

5.根据后面的than可知此处用比较级，故把well改成better。

6.固定搭配：decide to do sth.决定做某事，故decided  find out。

7.句意：我走到Tina坐的地方。此处是where引导的地点状语从句，故把there改成where。

8.根据上文可知Tina是一个女孩，故把He---She。

9.句意：我的猫可能死了。此处on是多余的，故去掉。

10.此处是一个包含定语从句的复合句，the reason是先行词，在后面的定语从句中做原因状语，故把what---why。

【名师点睛】

reason

1.the reason for sth. /doing sth.为某事或做某事的理由。the reason for his being late他迟到的理由

2.reason理由（名词），在句中做主语，后面的表语从句用that引导。The reason was that he had little education.理由是他受教育少。

3.reason理由（名词），作先行词，在定语从句中作原因状语时用why引导定语从句，比如：The reason why he was late for class was that his mother was ill.他上课迟到的理由是她的妈妈病了。reason理由（名词），作先行词，在定语从句中作主语或宾语时用that/which,比如：The reason that/which she gave me was that she had got up late.他给我的理由是他起床晚了。本题第10小题就是reason做原因状语的用法。