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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Most people directly link senior high school life with plenty of stress and endless homeworks. However, some interest activities indeed contribute to reduce the pressure. Last week the entertainment department of our Student Union organized the activity in which each class shoot a short movie. Our class chose a story setting in World War II, that showed the preciousness of peace. I think his process was a good lesson that taught to me how to strike a balance between studying or relaxation. Now I determined than ever to treasure everything I have and fight for my future.

 

1. homeworks→homework;2. interest→interesting;3. reduce→reducing;4. the→an;5. shoot→shot;6. settimg→set;7. that→which;8. 去掉taught后面的to;9. or→and;10. 在determined前加more 【解析】本文为记叙文。文章中作者记叙了学校里开展的一次减压活动。 第一处:homeworks改为homework;考查名词单复数。homework“家庭作业”,为不可数名词。故homeworks改为homework。 第二处:interest改为interesting;考查形容词。此处修饰名词activities,意为“有趣的活动”,应使用形容词“有趣的”。故interest改为interesting。 第三处:reduce改为reducing;考查词组搭配。contribute to“有助于”,to为介词。故reduce改为reducing。 第四处:the改为an;考查冠词。此处表泛指“学生会组织了一次活动”,activity为元音音素开头的名词,应使用不定冠词an。故the改为an。 第五处:shoot改为shot;考查动词时态。根据语境可知,此处描述的是过去的事情,应使用一般过去时。故shoot改为shot。 第六处:setting改为set;考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知,此处a story与set为逻辑被动关系,应使用过去分词作定语,意为“一个背景被设置在二战中的故事”。故setting改为set。 第七处:that改为which;考查定语从句连接词。此处为非限定性定语从句,先行词为story,that不能引导非限定性定语从句。故that改为which。 第八处:去掉taught后面的to;考查动词词性。teach为及物动词,使用to多余。故去掉taught后面的to。 第九处:or改为and;考查并列连词。根据句意可知,此处应为并列关系而不是选择关系,意为“学习和放松之间的平衡”。故or改为and。 第十处:在determined前加more;考查比较级。根据句中的than可知,此处应使用比较级,determined为多音节形容词,应使用more构成比较级。故在determined前加more。  
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In 1.(tradition) Chinese culture, tai chi is often related to the Chinese idea of yin and yang, the idea that one can see two sides in everything. Once 2.a time, Taoist Zhang Sanfeng saw a bird attacking a snake in the Wudang Mountains in Hubei province. The snake’s defense inspired him 3.(create) a set of 72 movements, which used4.(soft) and power from inside to defeat violent force.

For those5.do it, tai chi can be practiced anytime and anywhere without equipment or a gymnasium. And learning to do it6.(correct) gives us a practical way to achieve such things as balance, motor control and rhythm(节奏) of movement. So it7.(believe) that practicing tai chi can in some way help us stand, walk, move and run better.

Tai chi’s benefits certainly go beyond physical ones. For Marleni Calcina from Peru, who 8.(do) tai chi for over 10 years, it’s not only a sport, but also a way of life. And 9.is tai chi that has helped her understand the value of “going slowly”. Now, practicing tai chi is like 10.(speak) with her soul.

 

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I have always thought of myself as a doer. In work, I certainly was and continue to be. As a mom, I’m mostly a doer. However, my_______for breast cancer made me_________I hadn’t been a doer in the way I wanted to bebut that was about to_________.

Since I became a_________and reported many plane crashes, I’ve been _______of flying. My family had _______been to another continent together. Now that the chemo(化疗) _______, as a gift to myself, my kids and my mom, I took them all to London to _______life before beginning radiation every weekday for six weeks.

This time I made a_______not to think too much about it. Looking in the mirror without hair, you do your best to __________your day as though it were a day __________you discovered your lump(肿瘤). Then everything seems doable. __________I just booked the trip. In London, every day I __________a different adventure, from which my family and I learned much and __________ourselves.

I had wanted to take a__________like this for years, but life and work had gotten in the way. Now, __________life and work, we had finally done__________. I have thoroughly enjoyed family learning ____________living, but nothing is better than knowing that my kids feel __________for the trip. One day, perhaps they’ll realize that sometimes, the best__________come(s) after surviving your greatest fears.

1.A. concern    B. reason    C. treatment    D. anxiety

2.A. realize              B .imagine          C. ignore              D. doubt

3.A. continue    B. change    C. happen    D. arise

4.A. pilot    B. doctor    C. tourist              D .journalist

5.A. tired    B. fond    C. proud    D. afraid

6.A. frequently    B. never    C. already    D. just

7.A. failed    B. delayed    C. ended    D. approached

8.A. save    B. create    C. improve    D. celebrate

9.A. decision    B. wish    C. judgment    D. conclusion

10.A. get rid of    B. get through    C. look back on    D. look for

11.A. before    B. after    C. until    D. when

12.A. But    B. Otherwise    C. So    D. Even

13.A. expected    B. planned    C. described    D. experienced

14.A. taught    B. enjoyed    C. introduced    D. trained

15.A. trip    B. rest    C. risk    D. lesson

16.A. in terms of    B. owing to    C. in addition to    D. regardless of

17.A. it    B. them    C. everything    D. something

18.A. for                  B .with              C. by                  D. beyond

19.A. eager    B. grateful    C. ready    D. sorry

20.A. work    B. love    C. adventures    D. chances

 

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Which is much more significant to you when you are finding a job? Working experience or an advanced-degree? Well, I believe diverse people have different answers. 1. Here are following reasons:

Above of all, most of jobs don’t require such a high degree, which means just some few works, such as, theoretical physics, archaeology, or literature, need high academic qualification. 2. For example, when you are offering a department manager post, there is a man who has already been a manager for three years but only have a master’s degree and a no-experienced person with doctor’s degree, which one would you choose? Definitely the first one for the manager don’t acquire a doctor’s degree but rich working experience.

3. For instance, Bill Gates, who was the richest man in the world and also one of the most successful merchant. What a wise choice when he decided to abandon studying so that he can gain more working experience instead of a doctor’s degree. Or Steve Paul Jobs, who discontinue his study at his age of nineteen in order to become a personnel of a computer company just like Bill Gates. 4.

5. Maybe you shouldn’t have to gain an advanced or highest degree, but that doesn’t mean nothing. Probably a bachelor’s degree is still necessary in this fierce-competition society.

All in all, I think rich working experience is much more important than the advanced-degree.

A. However, a degree is still required for most people.

B. Meanwhile, rich working experience will draw more attention.

C. Secondly, plenty of experience will bring you success much earlier.

D. In my view, either working experience or advanced-degree counts.

E. As for me, I will say working experience without hesitation.

F. As a matter of fact, more people with rich working experience become successful.

G. From all of these, we can see that advanced-degree isn’t so necessary as working experience.

 

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According to a team of researchers, an animals’ ability to perceive(感知)time is linked to their pace of life.

   “Our results lend support to the importance of time perception in animals where the ability to perceive time in a very short time may be the difference between life and death for fast moving creatures.” commented lead author Kevin Healy from Trinity College Dublin.

The study was done with a variety of animals using a phenomenon based on the maximum speed of flashes of light an individual can see before the light source is seen as constant. Dogs, for example, have eyes with a refresh rate higher than humans.

One example of this phenomenon at work, the authors say, is the housefly and its ability to avoid being hit. The research showed flies “observe motion in a shorter time than our own eyes can achieve,” which allows them to avoid being hit. 

Professor Graeme Ruxton of the University of St Andrews in Scotland, who worked jointly on the research project, said in a statement, “Having eyes that send updates to the brain at much higher frequencies than our eyes do is of no value if the brain cannot process that information equally quickly. Thus, this work highlights the impressive abilities of even the smallest animal brains. Flies might not be deep thinkers, but they can make good decisions very quickly. ”

In comparison, the tiger beetle (虎甲虫)runs faster than its eyes can keep up, basically becoming blind, which requires it to stop periodically to re-evaluate its prey’s (猎物)position.

Our results suggest that time perception offers an as yet unstudied dimension along which animals can specialize and there is considerable range to study this system in more detail.

1.What is the research mentioned in the passage mainly about?

A. Pace of life of animals.    B. Time perception of animals.

C. Lifetime of small animals.    D. Impressive abilities of animals.

2.What does Kevin Healy’s comment mean in Para. 2?

A. The ability of animals to perceive time depends on their high moving speed.

B. The survival of fast moving animals relies on their ability to perceive time.

C. Animals with quicker pace of life have better perception of time.

D. Animals with poor ability of time perception have a shorter life.

3.Why can houseflies avoid being hit?

A. They can think very deeply before they act.

B. They can fly much faster than their eyes can keep up.

C. They can process the information as quickly as they receive it.

D. They can send information to brain more quickly than to their eyes.

4.What will a tiger beetle have to do to catch a moving prey?

A. Try to run as fast as it can.

B. Prevent itself from becoming blind.

C. Slow down to gain its time perception.

D. Stop occasionally to spot the prey again.

 

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Booking a trip on an online travel site is convenient, but comes with its own set of problems.

They know who’s gone to spend more.

Last year, U. S travel research company Orbitz tracked people’s online activities to test out whether Mac users spend more on travel than PC users. Turns out that on average, Mac users lay out US $ 20~30 more per night on hotels. As a result, online travel sites show these users more expensive travel options first. To avoid paying more, sort results by price.

Their software doesn’t always link to the hotel’s system.

A guaranteed reservation is almost impossible to come by anywhere but the risk of your flight or hotel being overbooked increases with third-party providers. The middleman’s software isn’t immune(防护作用的) to system errors, so always call the hotel or airline to make sure your booking was processed.

You could miss out on loyalty (积分) points.

Third party providers can get between you and frequent flyer miles or points. Many hotel loyalty programs don’t recognize external sites, others award only minimum points without special offers, like double points on hotel stays.

Don’t be fooled by packages: Often, they’re low-end items grouped together.

Ever notice how travel sites recommend a hotel, a rental car, and tour package all in one click. These deals usually feature travel that no one wants, like flights with multiple layovers(中途停留). Check the fine print.

Once your trip is purchased, you’re on your own.

An online travel agency can’t provide assistance the same way an agent can if a flight is cancelled or a room is substandard. Basically, when you arrive at the airport or hotel, you’re just another customer who booked at the lowest rate.

1.What does the writer mainly intend to tell readers?

A. Tips of how to reserve flights on line.

B. Problems of reserving a hotel on line.

C. Notices about reserving a trip on line.

D. Traps in reserving hotels and flights on line.

2.Why do people probably spend more on their online reservation for trips?

A. They book at prices offered first by travel sites.

B. They are shown less expensive travel options first.

C. Some of the travel expenses are earned by Mac users.

D. Their flights or hotels are overbooked by tourist agencies.

3.Which of the following can replace the underlined “fine print”?

A. Detailed items.    B. Discounted prices.

C. Good deals.    D. Special services.

4.What can we learn from the passage?

A. The third parties will provide good travel services on line.

B. Few people book trips on line because of possible troubles.

C. Travelers’ interests may not be guaranteed with booking on line.

D. Those booking trips on line will benefit much from loyalty points

 

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