Question

假设你叫李华，是一家英文杂志社的心理咨询师。某中学生小王给你写信，提到自己偏胖，想节食减肥，征求你的意见。请你给她回一封信，谈谈你对该问题的见解。内容要点如下：

1．健康比漂亮更重要；

2．学生以学习为主，不要过于注重外貌和别人的看法；

3．可通过多锻炼身体保持健康，要改变不良的饮食习惯；

4．健康的心态也很重要。

注意：  1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；

2．词数：100左右。    3．参考词汇：state of mind 心态

Dear Xiao Wang,

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

Yours

Answer

Dear Xiao Wang,

I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting. It is only natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful. However, in my opinion, health is more important than beauty. For a student, studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second. So do not let others’ opinions affect your normal life. However, if you do want to lose weight, it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing unhealthy eating habits. The most important thing is that you keep a healthy state of mind, as it will help with your studies, and will also help you overcome difficulties in dieting. I hope my advice will be helpful to you and I’m looking forward to your next letter. Yours, Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封回信；假设你叫李华，是一家英文杂志社的心理咨询师，要给中学生小王给写一封信，针对他提到的自己偏胖、想节食减肥的问题提出你的意见；本文时态应主要使用一般现在时和一般将来时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：lose weight（减肥），diet（节食）be more important than（比……更重要），the first thing to consider（首要考虑的问题），appearance（外表），get exercise（锻炼），unhealthy eating habits（不健康的饮食习惯），a healthy state of mind（健康的心态）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮点说明】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了很多高级表达方式，如定语从句I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.；主语从句It is only natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful.；条件状语从句However, if you do want to lose weight, it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing unhealthy eating habits.

非谓语动词For a student, studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second.此外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。