Question

假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Peter发邮件说，他正在学汉语，但感觉很吃力，请求你给予帮助。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：

1．举例说明汉语学习的特点；

2．提供一些可行的建议。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer

Dear Peter,

Hope this email finds you well! Last time you said you were learning Chinese but encountered some difficulties. It’s inevitable because English emphasizes the structure, while Chinese focuses on the meaning. With regard to the matter you mentioned in your letter, my suggestions are as follows:

Firstly, I would recommend you to find a native speaker as a language partner, and meet with him on a regular basis. Besides, watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs can make the learning process much more interesting.

Those are the tips on my mind now. I would always be pleased to offer you help. I do hope you will find to proposals practical.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇电子邮件。你的留学生朋友Peter正在学汉语，但感觉很吃力，发邮件请求你给予帮助。现在你给他回封邮件。内容要点已给出，成文时要注意：1.文章主要用第一人称；2.时态：一般现在时为主；3.文章的内容要点要齐全：（1）举例说明汉语学习的特点；（2）提供一些可行的建议。4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次；5.注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数控制，100单词左右。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封电子邮件，格式正确，内容齐全，结构合理，语句精炼，同时使用高级句子。Last time you said you were learning Chinese but encountered some difficulties.宾语从句中but的使用恰到好处；It’s inevitable because English emphasizes the structure, while Chinese focuses on the meaning. Because引导原因状语从句，while引导并列句，表示前后的鲜明对比，堪称完美；With regard to the matter you mentioned in your letter运用定语从句；watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs can make the learning process much more interesting.动名词短语作主语；I do hope you will find to proposals practical.强调谓语画龙点睛；另外，as follows，Firstly, Besides的运用让文章层次清晰。