Question

    假如你是高二学生李华，请围绕“中学生独立性培养”的话题为某英文报投稿，主要内容包括：

   1. begin with our own things: clean the bedroom…

    2. help with the housework: do some cooking…

    3. learn actively in class:

    4. think for ourselves:

注意：

    1.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数；

    2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

    3.词数100左右。

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Answer

One possible version:

As middle school students, it’s high time we learned to do everything independently, which is of great importance to our future life. We can begin with small things such as washing our own clothes and cleaning our own bedrooms. Arriving home after school, we can give our parents a hand by helping them cook supper. As for studying in class, we should learn actively. It’s important for us to develop our ability of independent thinking, that is, think about questions by ourselves. We sometimes need to make plans or decisions alone. Don’t always depend on others.

If we keep on doing like this, we’ll surly become more and more independent.

【解析】【名师点睛】

本文是一篇开放性作文。文章只给出了题目和简单的提示。考生在成文时应注意：合理发挥想象力，使文章的表达自然，丰满。文章的写作要点要齐全：1. begin with our own things: clean the bedroom…2. help with the housework: do some cooking…3. learn actively in class:4. think for ourselves:注意文章的人称：以第一人称为主。时态：一般现在时。注意使用高级词汇和句型，以提高文章的档次；恰当使用一些连词、插入语，使文章表达自然，流畅。注意次数：80—120之间。

【范文亮点】①As middle school students, it’s high time we learned to do everything independently, which is of great importance to our future life.虚拟语气，定语从句。②Arriving home after school, we can give our parents a hand by helping them cook supper.非谓语动词短语作状语。③It’s important for us to develop our ability of independent thinking, that is, think about questions by ourselves. 形式主语的句子。