Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;

      2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Nowadays many people drive instead of taking a bus or walking to work. It causes more traffic jam: and accidents. As the student, what can we do to guarantee our safe? First of all, the traffic rules must be strict obeyed. When we cross streets, wait until the traffic light turn green. Next, don't forget walk on the pavement. Finally, I think it very dangerously to wear headphones while walking or cycling. Since we can't pay enough attention on the traffic around us, so accidents may happen. Taking good care of ourselves and don't let our parents worry about us.

Answer

Nowadays many people drive instead of taking a bus or walking to work. It causes more traffic jam: and accidents.

jams

As the student, what can we do to guarantee our safe? First of all, the traffic rules must be strict obeyed. When we

a safety strictly

cross streets, wait until the traffic light turn green. Next, don't forget∧ walk on the pavement. Finally, I think it

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very dangerously to wear headphones while walking or cycling. Since we can't pay enough attention on the traffic

dangerous to

around us, so accidents may happen. Taking good care of ourselves and don't let our parents worry about us.

Take

【解析】jam改为jams 2. As后面的the改为a 3.safe改为safety 4.strict改为strickly 5.turn改为turns 6.forget后加to 7.dangerously改为dangerous 8.attention后的on改为to 9. 去掉so 10.Taking改为Take

1.根据accidents可知用名词复数形式，故把jam改为jams。

2.句意：作为一名学生。故把As后面的the改为a。

3.形容词性物质代词修饰名词，故把safe改为safety。

4.副词修饰动词，故把strict改为strickly 。

5.此处the traffic light是句子主语，句子用一般现在时态，故把turn改为turns。

6.句意：不要忘了要在人行道上走。forget to do sth.忘记去做某事，故在forget后加to。

7.此处是形容词做宾语补足语，故把dangerously改为dangerous。

8.固定词组：pay attention to重视，故把attention后的on改为to。

9. 此处Since引导原因状语从句，不能和so在同一句中连用，故去掉so。

10.句意：照顾好我们自己，不要让我们的父母担忧我们。根据句意可知用祈使句，故把Taking改为Take。注意大写开头。

【名师点睛】

动词后面跟动词不定式和动名词意思不一样：mean doing意味着做某事， mean to do打算做某事； regret doing后悔曾经做过某事，regret to do遗憾地去做某事； try doing 尝试做某事，try to do努力去做某事； forget doing 忘记曾做过某事，forget to do 忘记要去做某事；remember doing记得曾经做过某事， remember to do记得要去做某事。本句第6小题，就是动词后面用动词不定式还是用动名词。根据句意“不要忘了要在人行道上走”可知是还未发生的事情，要用动词不定式做宾语。

【名师点睛】

英语中有一些词不能在同一句中连用：

enter不能和into在同一句中使用；repeat不能和again在同一句中使用；return不能和back在同一句中使用；because/because of/as/since（因为），不能和so在用一句中出现；though/although/while/in spite of/despite(尽管)，不能和but在同一句中使用。本题第9小题就是since既然，的这一用法考查。