Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

  Now I want to tell you something what happened last weekend. On my way to the cinema, I noticed a foreigner talk to a policemen who seemed able to understand what the foreigner was saying. They two looked very worriedly. So I went up to see what I could do help them. I told the policeman the foreigner had lost his wallet or camera. Finally the foreigner got back his belonging with the help of the policeman. All of them thanked me. By the time I arrived at the cinema, the film have been over. Although I’d missed the film, but I was very happy because I had helped others with my efforts.

Answer

1. what 改为that 2. talk 改为talking 3. able 改为unable 4. worriedly改为worried

5. do后面加to 6. or 改为and 7. belonging改为belongings

8. all改为both 9. have 改为has 10. 去掉but

【解析】1.something后跟定语从句，关系词用that。也可去掉something，what引导宾语从句。

2.此处强调某人正在做某事，用notice sb doing sth，故把talk改为talking。

3.此处表达警察看起来理解不了外国人说的话。故把able改为unable。

4.look是系动词，后面应该用形容词作表语，故把worriedly改为worried。

5.句意：因此我上前去看我能帮什么忙。此处表示目的，故在help前加to。

6.此处表达丢了钱包和相机，而不是两者中的一个。故把or改为and。

7.这里财物不只一个，belonging表“财物”是可数名词，故改为复数形式。

8.此处表达“警察和外国人都……”，是两个人，而all表示三者以上，故要改为both。

9.电影结束在我到达电影院之前，故主句应该用过去完成时。故把have改为had。

10. although 与but不能连用，故去掉but。

【名师点睛】

一个句子当中如果已经存在一个主句（谓语动词），又没有连词的情况下，还有别的动词出现时，这些动词就充当了非谓语动词。比如第2和5小题，分析句子可知，这两句话中都有谓语动词，即noticed，could do，所以其余的动词要用非谓语，第一处为宾语补足语，notice sb doing，表示“注意到某人正在做某事”，第2处作目的状语，用to do。