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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改后的词。 删除:把多余的词...

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出修改后的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing to tell you anything about the 10th English Speaking Contest I took part in it last week in our school.

I got the “Top Ten Prize” out of the 30 competitors ,who was completely beyond my imagination. A moment I heard the final result, I couldn’t believe my ears and jumped with joy, feeling amazing. Since the contest, whenever you had free time, you would help me practice my spoken English. You communicated with me, and corrected my pronounce. What’s more, you taught me a lot of speaking skills and made me full of confidence. If you haven’t helped me, I couldn’t have achieved such a good result. I have benefited this contest a lot.

All in all, thank you for which you have done for me.

Yours,

Wang Yuan

 

【解析】Tell you something about…表示告诉你有关… 的事情,应该用something。 I took part in 为定语从句,省略了关系代词that,that 在从句中作宾语,所以it多余。 定语从句who was completely beyond my imagination.表示这件事出乎自己的意料,所以应该用关系代词which,而不应该用who。 The moment 表示一…就,作连词连接两句话 Feeling amazed 感到震惊,用过去分词 根据语境可知,此处表达比赛前,老师对自己的帮助,所以应该用before。 corrected my pronunciation. my为形容词性的物主代词,后面应该用名词。 If you hadn’t helped me, I couldn’t have achieved such a good result.此句表示与过去事实相反的虚拟语气,从句用过去完成时。 I benefited from the contest a lot.表示获益良多。Benefit from 从。。。获益 介词for后的宾语从句,用what 引导表示你为我们所做的。 名师点睛: 短文改错解题四原则:改动以最少为原则; 虚词以添加或删除为原则; 实词以改变词形为原则以保持句子原意为原则。短文改错解题步骤:通读全文,掌握大意; 整句分析,逐行推敲。 就此题而言:错误类型主要有: 不定代词的用法 定语从句中关系代词、副词是否准确无误; 人称代词的误用 冠词的用法 非谓语动词的用法; 连词的用法 动词名词误用 宾语从句连接词的用法 介词使用问题 固定短语搭配 下面重点分析一下从句连词的使用问题。 如此题中的第2,3,10题, 2. 通读整句…about the 10th English Speaking Contest I took part in it last week in our school.可判断出此句考查定语从句,先行词为English Speaking Contest,从句中应该缺少宾语,用关系代词吐哈他,此处省略关系词that,后定语从句中的it 多余。 3.I got the “Top Ten Prize” out of the 30 competitors ,who was completely beyond my imagination. 此句考查非限定性定语从句,第一步先找先行词,此句的象形此为前面的一句话,所以关系代词who错误,who指人,不能指事情。 10.thank you for what you have done for me.此处for 为介词,所以后为宾语从句,又因为后句you为主语,have done 为谓语,所以缺宾语,表示做了些什么,所以应该用连接代词what,而不是which。  
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