Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

      2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Tom is no longer the boy he used to be. Only a year before, he was overweight and a little lazy. He got tiring easily and did not like sports. It was not until he got serious ill that he realized that he should make a change. He started to exercise and begin to eat a healthier diet of more vegetables or less meat. These changes helped her lose a lot of weight. He is now a very happy boy at very good shape, and that he is always so active.

We can learn from Tom that we should careful about what we eat and make sure that we take enough exercises.

Answer

Tom is no longer the boy he used to be . Only a year before, he was overweight and la little lazy. He got

ago

tiring easily and did not like sports. It was not until he got serious ill that he realized that he should

tired seriously

make a change. He started to exercise and begin to eat a healthier diet of more vegetables or less meat.

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These changes helped her lose a lot of weight. He is now a very happy boy at very good shape, and that

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he is always so active.

We can learn from Tom that we should^ careful about what we eat and make sure that we take enough exercises. be或careful改care

exercise

【解析】第一处：before+时间；时间+ago；在……之前。E.g:before a year; a year ago 一年前。答案：before→ago。

第二处：tiring无聊的，累人的，tired疲倦的。句意应为：他很容易感到疲倦。答案：tiring→tired。

第三处：修饰ill生病的应用副词形式。答案：serious→seriously。

第四处：由并列动词started可知此处begin也应为过去时。答案：begin→began。

第五处：更多的水果和更少的肉。此处应为并列，用and。答案：or→and。

第六处：文章主人公为男生，her应改为him。答案：her→him。

第七处：be in a good shape处于一个良好的外形状态，为固定搭配。答案：at→in。

第八处：that在此处为多余成分，应去掉。答案：去掉that。

第九处：should后应有动词，故在careful前加be，或将careful改为care。答案：careful前加be，或careful→care。

第十处：exercise译为锻炼时为不可数名词，译为练习时为可数名词。此处意思为锻炼，应为复数形式，故应加S。答案：exercise→exercises。